帮助英文文章改错英语牛人帮忙,虽然本人是英语牛人团团员,但这份题目非常重要,因此想做到100％,而且,这是新加坡中学题目,估计至少相当于四级,请诸位帮帮小弟.这是一篇采访稿,内有20个

帮助英文文章改错英语牛人帮忙,虽然本人是英语牛人团团员,但这份题目非常重要,因此想做到100％,而且,这是新加坡中学题目,估计至少相当于四级,请诸位帮帮小弟.这是一篇采访稿,内有20个
帮助英文文章改错
英语牛人帮忙,虽然本人是英语牛人团团员,但这份题目非常重要,因此想做到100％,而且,这是新加坡中学题目,估计至少相当于四级,请诸位帮帮小弟.
这是一篇采访稿,内有20个错误（全部语法,不要费劲找单词拼写错误或标点符号错误,只能修改,不能添加或删除）,为了方便,每段话我都加了号码,不过这是一整篇文章,你们说几号的哪里错了,应该改为什么,找不够20个没关系,能找几个找几个,集思广益没问题,
1.Interviewer:How long did the journey takes?
2.Miss Li:About fifteen minutes.There was a good bus service where I live.
3.Interviewer:What attracted you to the present job?
4.
Miss Li:I am feeling that a job in the sales department would provide
me with the experience I am needing.I also am thinking that your firm
is well establish and the prospects are good.
5.Interviewer:Could I know something about your education?
6.
Miss Li:I complete my O-levels（剑桥O水准,新加坡的中考） three years ago and last
year I have taken three A levels（剑桥A水准,新加坡的高考）in Economics,Commerce and
History.
7.Interviewer:And what did you do since then?
8.
Miss Li:For the past I worked as a stenographer in a small firm.The
pay is all right but the work is not challenging enough and I feel I am
not learning very much.
9.Interviewer:What are your present duties and responisbilities?
10.
Miss Li:I do a few shorthand,typing and filing.But I have less
responsibilities than my colleagues.I would be much more better in my
works if I had more duties.
11.Interviewer:So you find the work a little dull?Have you spoken to your supervisor about this?
12.MIss Li:Yes,we discussed about the matter at our last meeting but he said he could not let me to do more wokr unless I can carry it on efficiently.If you think I can take what it has to get this job,I am prepared to do a more challenging work.

帮助英文文章改错英语牛人帮忙,虽然本人是英语牛人团团员,但这份题目非常重要,因此想做到100％,而且,这是新加坡中学题目,估计至少相当于四级,请诸位帮帮小弟.这是一篇采访稿,内有20个
1 how long did the journey (take)

2There (is) a good bus service where I live.

3 what (attracts) you to the present job

4 I (feel that a job in the sales department （will） provide me with the experience I (need). I also am thinking that your firm is well (established) and the prospects are good.

6 I ( completed )my O-levels three years ago and last year I have taken three A levels in Economics, Commerce and History.

7. And what did you do since then

8. (In the past) I worked as a stenographer in a small firm.
The pay (was) all right but the work (was) not challenging enough and I (felt) I (was) not learnin
g very much.

9. What are yourpresent duties and responisbilities?

10 I do a (little) shorthand, typing and filing.
But I have less responsibilities than my colleagues.
I would be much (better) in my (work) if I had more duties.
11. So you find the work a little dull? Have you spoken to your supervisor about this?
12. Yes, we discussed about the matter at our last meeting but he said he could not (let me do) more (work) unless I (could) carry it on efficiently. If you think I can take what it has to get this job, I (will be) prepared to do a more challenging work.

最后一个偶不是很确定,因为be prepared to 已经有将来的意味了.第八中第二句 偶觉得前面分句现在时也是可以的.如果12句中work是打字错误 那么应该还有一个.

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Best wishes,
Kyon