英语改错,共十处错误,原因说清楚.文章如下：Henry is a clever student.One day,he happened to break a precious vase belonging his teacher .Heard his teacher`s footspots,he quickiy held the broken vase before him.As the teacher walked

英语改错,共十处错误,原因说清楚.文章如下：Henry is a clever student.One day,he happened to break a precious vase belonging his teacher .Heard his teacher`s footspots,he quickiy held the broken vase before him.As the teacher walked
英语改错,共十处错误,原因说清楚.文章如下：
Henry is a clever student.One day,he happened to break a precious vase belonging his
teacher .Heard his teacher`s footspots,he quickiy held the broken vase before him.As the teacher walked up to him,he asked,"Master,I had been thinking about this question for years.How does one have to die?""I am giad to hear that you can raise so a thoughtful question,"said the teacher."Something has a beginning and an end.Everything has just so iong to live on and then has to die."Onhearing this,Henry held out the piece of the broken vase and said,""A time for your vase to die has come."
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英语改错,共十处错误,原因说清楚.文章如下：Henry is a clever student.One day,he happened to break a precious vase belonging his teacher .Heard his teacher`s footspots,he quickiy held the broken vase before him.As the teacher walked
belonging to（固定搭配）
heard changes to hearing（用现在分词作非谓语）
footspots changes to footsteps (步伐)
before changes to behind（藏在“身后”不是"身前"）
had been thinking changes to have been thinking（用现在完成时）
How changes to Why（提出问题：“为什么人人都免不了一死?”,而不是“怎么样死”）
giad changes to glad (spelling error)
so a changes to such a（固定搭配）
Something changes to everything (后面使用everything)
piece changes to pieces（碎片多片,复数）
A changes to The（用定冠词,"The time for your vase to die"）

Heard 应该是hearding。end加ing

Line one: belonging ---- belonged to
Line two: Heard---- Hearing How-- Why
Line there: had been thinking ---- have been thinking 现在完成进行时就可以了
Line four: giad --- glad . raise-...

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Line one: belonging ---- belonged to
Line two: Heard---- Hearing How-- Why
Line there: had been thinking ---- have been thinking 现在完成进行时就可以了
Line four: giad --- glad . raise---- ask so---such a- an (thoughtful) Somthing---everythhing
Line five: A---The time for ....
正好10个，但是我感觉还有错误。

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belonging后添to（belong to表示“属于”，固定搭配）
heard改为hearing（“他”与“听到”的关系是主动，用现在分词作非谓语）
before改为behind（藏在“身后”）
had改为has（这个问题持续到现在，用现在完成时）
How改为Why（提出问题：“为什么人人都免不了一死？”，而不是“怎么样”）
so改为such（such ...

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belonging后添to（belong to表示“属于”，固定搭配）
heard改为hearing（“他”与“听到”的关系是主动，用现在分词作非谓语）
before改为behind（藏在“身后”）
had改为has（这个问题持续到现在，用现在完成时）
How改为Why（提出问题：“为什么人人都免不了一死？”，而不是“怎么样”）
so改为such（such a adj 可数名词单数形式）
something改为everything（“所有事物都是有生有死”，而不是“有些事物”）
live on去掉on（on后面没有宾语，所以live不用介词）
piece改为pieces（碎片不止一片，复数）
A改为The（特指花瓶，用定冠词）

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我尽力来吧，belonging to 固定短语。behind him 藏在后面。before 是前面的意思。have been thinking 对话里现在时。why does 用how根本读不通，（one用的也奇怪！）。glad to .。a so thoughtful。beginning和end前去掉定冠词a.an 。the time for。。。仅供参考！

belonging （to），hearing,I...glad，so thoughtful a question

belonging后加to:belong to“属于”，固定搭配。
heard变hearing，“他”和“听”是主动关系。
before变behind。是把花瓶藏在身后，这样老师看不见。
had been的had变have。是现在完成进行时，表示从过去到现在一直在发生。
so变such。such修饰名词，so修饰形容词。
something变everythi...

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belonging后加to:belong to“属于”，固定搭配。
heard变hearing，“他”和“听”是主动关系。
before变behind。是把花瓶藏在身后，这样老师看不见。
had been的had变have。是现在完成进行时，表示从过去到现在一直在发生。
so变such。such修饰名词，so修饰形容词。
something变everything。一切事情都有开始和结束。而且下一句也提到everything
piece变pieces。花瓶碎片不可能只有一片。\7
live后面的on去掉
live on是依赖...生存。这里是说无论什么东西，都能活很长一段时间。强调“活着”。

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