初三英语作文,帮忙看看有什么语法错误的地方.Hello ,everyone,I am glad to be here to share something about how to study math well.Here are my own ways :First,preview is very important,because it can help us understant what the teache

初三英语作文,帮忙看看有什么语法错误的地方.Hello ,everyone,I am glad to be here to share something about how to study math well.Here are my own ways :First,preview is very important,because it can help us understant what the teache
初三英语作文,帮忙看看有什么语法错误的地方.
Hello ,everyone,
I am glad to be here to share something about how to study math well.Here are my own ways :First,preview is very important,because it can help us understant what the teacher say in the class easily.Second,we must be more careful when we are having a class.If you have some questions,you should ask your teachers or classmates for the answer,and remember not to be shy.Third,don't copy other's homework and correct the mistakes carefully.
Math is not so difficult,I sure you will learn it well if you work hard.I hope you can make a progress in it
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初三英语作文,帮忙看看有什么语法错误的地方.Hello ,everyone,I am glad to be here to share something about how to study math well.Here are my own ways :First,preview is very important,because it can help us understant what the teache
文章写得非常好,语言流畅,地道.以下几点仅供你参考：
what the teacher says/what the teachers say
in class (如：after class,无冠词)
when we are having classes
if you have any questions
for the answers
don't copy others' homework
I am sure
make progress
虽有一些小小的瑕疵,但依旧是一篇非常出色的文章,令人一读再读.

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I am glad to talk with you all about how to study math well. Here are my own ways : First,preview is very important, because it can help us understant what the teacher say i...

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Hello ，everyone,
I am glad to talk with you all about how to study math well. Here are my own ways : First,preview is very important, because it can help us understant what the teacher say in the class easily. Second, we must be all attention in class. If you have some questions, you should ask your teachers or classmates for the answers, and remember not to be shy. Third, don't copy others' homework and correct the mistakes carefully.
Math is not so difficult,I'm sure you will learn it better if you work hard at it. I hope you can make great progress on it !

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第四行 结尾那,if you have any questions.不是some.
倒数第二行.I'm sure you will learn it well.掉了BE动词.
其余没什么大问题,语句挺生硬,多看看原生碟.听听地道英语.
个人感觉Firstly Secondly Thirdly等等比First起头好.

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Hello ，everyone,
I am glad to be here to share something about how to study math well. there are my own ways : First,preview is very important, because it can help us understant ...

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修改后的作文如下：
Hello ，everyone,
I am glad to be here to share something about how to study math well. there are my own ways : First,preview is very important, because it can help us understant what the teacher say in class easily. Second, we must be more careful when we are having the class. If you have any questions, you should ask your teachers or classmates for the answers, and remember not to be shy. Third, don't copy others' homework and correct the mistakes carefully.
Math is not very difficult,I am sure you will learn it well if you work hard. I hope you can make progress on it !
不懂得可以问我！

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line 3: understant - understand
line 4: the teacher say -> the teacher will say
line 4: must be more careful -> must pay close attention
line 5: when we are having a class -> during the c...

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line 3: understant - understand
line 4: the teacher say -> the teacher will say
line 4: must be more careful -> must pay close attention
line 5: when we are having a class -> during the class
line 6: some questions -> any question
line 7: for the answer -> for help
line 7: not to be shy -> don't be shy
line 10: difficult,->difficult.
line 10: I sure -> I am sure

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