Dear Amy：Hi,Amy .I will hold the English night meeting in order to raise money for poor children.Would you like to come to our meeting?If you will come,please tell me.The place is the classroon of Class 3,Gread 8.The time is from 3.00p.m to 5.00p.m
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Dear Amy：Hi,Amy .I will hold the English night meeting in order to raise money for poor children.Would you like to come to our meeting?If you will come,please tell me.The place is the classroon of Class 3,Gread 8.The time is from 3.00p.m to 5.00p.m
Dear Amy：
Hi,Amy .I will hold the English night meeting in order to raise money for poor children.Would you like to come to our meeting?If you will come,please tell me.The place is the classroon of Class 3,Gread 8.The time is from 3.00p.m to 5.00p.m on May 28th.
Yours.
Kangkang.
Dear Amy：Hi,Amy .I will hold the English night meeting in order to raise money for poor children.Would you like to come to our meeting?If you will come,please tell me.The place is the classroon of Class 3,Gread 8.The time is from 3.00p.m to 5.00p.m
attend our meeting
If you 后面不能用will吧.If you come to attend the meeting,.
开头HI,AMY可以去掉吧.已经有Dear Amy 了
最后the place 和 the time 感觉怪怪的,We will hold the meeting in the classroomClass 3,Gread 8from 3.00p.m to 5.00p.m on May 28th.
好吧我就是感觉这样更好,我也不晓得对不对哦_(￣0￣)_
亲爱的艾米：
嗨，艾米。我将要举行英语晚会为贫困儿童募集资金。你愿意来参加我们的会议吗？如果你愿意来，请告诉我。这个地方是3班，8年级的教室。时间是从3.00p。米米五月二十八日十。
你的。
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亲爱的艾米：
嗨，艾米。我将要举行英语晚会为贫困儿童募集资金。你愿意来参加我们的会议吗？如果你愿意来，请告诉我。这个地方是3班，8年级的教室。时间是从3.00p。米米五月二十八日十。
你的。
康康。
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