我的这篇英语作文有没有错?如果我的这篇英语作文有错,请大家帮忙指出来并教我怎么修改,What are you going to do during Spring Festival?During Spring Festival.I think me certain very happy.First,I am going to clean the

我的这篇英语作文有没有错?如果我的这篇英语作文有错,请大家帮忙指出来并教我怎么修改,What are you going to do during Spring Festival?During Spring Festival.I think me certain very happy.First,I am going to clean the
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What are you going to do during Spring Festival?
During Spring Festival.I think me certain very happy.First,I am going to clean the house during Spring Festival.Then,I am going to get lucky money and wear new clothes.I am going to visit relatives and friend.I think this Spring Festival me certain very happy.

我的这篇英语作文有没有错?如果我的这篇英语作文有错,请大家帮忙指出来并教我怎么修改,What are you going to do during Spring Festival?During Spring Festival.I think me certain very happy.First,I am going to clean the
What are you going to do during Spring Festival?
During Spring Festival(,) I think (I will certainly be) very happy.First,I am going to clean the house during Spring Festival.Then,I am going to (receive) lucky money and wear new clothes.I am going to visit relatives and friend(s).I think this Spring Festival (is certainly going to make me) very happy.
( ) 内是修改了的地方,写得不错啊!继续努力吧!

我一定会很快乐 I think I'll certainly be very happy. 结尾也是。
relatives and friends

What are you going to do during (the) Spring Festival?
I think me certain very happy.
改：I think I (certainly will be )very happy.
friend
改： friends
I think this Spring Festival me certain very happy.
改：I think I (certainly will be )very happy.

What are you going to do during Spring Festival?
During Spring Festiva, I think I will certainly be very happy. First, I am going to clean up the house. I am also going to receive lucky money from...

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What are you going to do during Spring Festival?
During Spring Festiva, I think I will certainly be very happy. First, I am going to clean up the house. I am also going to receive lucky money from my family and wear new clothes. I am going to visit relatives and friends. I am sure I will have a very nice Spring Festival this year.
改了点语法，改了点词，让文章少多样化点。其他的没怎么变。注意friends应该也是复数。

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What are you going to do during Spring Festival?
During Spring Festival.I 'm sure I will be very happy.First,I am going to clean the house during Spring Festival.Then, I am going to get lucky money and wear new clothes. finally,I am going to visit my relatives and friends. I think I will be very happy this spring festival.

春节前要加the the Spring Festival
i think me certain very happy. 这是一个病句 你可以说 i'm sure i will have a good holiday.
第一 不要直接说 First 可以说 first of all
I think this Spring Festival me certain ver...

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春节前要加the the Spring Festival
i think me certain very happy. 这是一个病句 你可以说 i'm sure i will have a good holiday.
第一 不要直接说 First 可以说 first of all
I think this Spring Festival me certain very happy. 病句 可以这样说 i will enjoy my nice Spring Festival.
lucky money 很别扭 用 gift 好一些 压岁钱也是礼物嘛

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Spring Festival is a good time for me to get together with my family. During this period, I am going to do something meaningful.
First,I am going to clean the house with my family members. Then, ...

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Spring Festival is a good time for me to get together with my family. During this period, I am going to do something meaningful.
First,I am going to clean the house with my family members. Then, I am going to visit relatives and friends. I will get the lucky money from my relatives. I think I will be happy during Spring Festival.
首先陈述 春节的意义！
其次说出主旨（做什么）！
最后谈出自己的感受！
语法指点：
1. I think me certain very happy. 可以改为：Certainly，I think I am very happy.
2. I am going to visit relatives and friend.（relatives and friends是并列的，都用复数）
需要从逻辑层次上进一步，尽量减少凑字行为！如果想凑字，可以换另一种句式啊！

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