谁可以用英语 My best holiday 为题写80字左右的短文（时间.地点.感受等）.写的不要太幼稚.可不可以短一点

谁可以用英语 My best holiday 为题写80字左右的短文（时间.地点.感受等）.写的不要太幼稚.可不可以短一点
谁可以用英语 My best holiday 为题写80字左右的短文（时间.地点.感受等）.写的不要太幼稚.
可不可以短一点

谁可以用英语 My best holiday 为题写80字左右的短文（时间.地点.感受等）.写的不要太幼稚.可不可以短一点
MY BEST HOLIDAY
There are a lot of holidays during my life time .
But I think the best holiday was last summer holiday . It was the time after I graduated from High School . So I felt very happy , because I can go to university and study the other interesting things that I have never learned. On the other hand . I could have a good rest after studying for a long time . So I could have a good sleep 、 surf on the internet 、watch TV and study to cook well.
But the most special thing was to go to have a past-time job in a toy factory . It was my first part-time job .You know that it is hard to find a job . At first , my friends and I wanted to be a waitar in a restaurant. We thought that working in a restaurant could could train our speechcragt and courage, because this was the first time that we went to find a job .So we always smiled. But unfortuntely , the restaurant didn't offer a part-time job .It made us feel shy .But we didn't give up ,so we found a job in a toy facyory ,In there we just wanted to put the marks on the little cars or other toys. Sometimes we could help the other workers to make the litter blackboards. It was very interesting . And as we know , toys of the factory were sented to the foreign counties .WO...It is cool. The toys which I made would be sent to other plsces . I thought it was wonderful . Even though the work which we did was easy ,the pay was good .So I fekt happier and happier , worked harder and harder. Finally , the boss was proud of us and gave us some extra !

你来写中文，我可以帮你译为英文。
楼上的文译为：
我最好的假日
有很多假日期间,我一生的时间。
但我觉得最好的假期是去年暑假。这是我从中学毕业后。所以,我感到非常高兴,因为我可以去大学学习其他有趣的东西,我从来没有学到的东西。另一方面。我可以好好休息之后很长一段时间。所以我可以睡个好觉,上网、看电视、学习做饭。
但最特别的事情就是去工作在一...

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你来写中文，我可以帮你译为英文。
楼上的文译为：
我最好的假日
有很多假日期间,我一生的时间。
但我觉得最好的假期是去年暑假。这是我从中学毕业后。所以,我感到非常高兴,因为我可以去大学学习其他有趣的东西,我从来没有学到的东西。另一方面。我可以好好休息之后很长一段时间。所以我可以睡个好觉,上网、看电视、学习做饭。
但最特别的事情就是去工作在一个玩具工厂。这是我第一次做兼职的工作。你知道,很难找到一份工作。起初,我的朋友,我想成为一个餐厅服务员。我们认为,在餐厅可能可以锻炼我们的勇气,因为这是第一次我们去找一份工作,所以我们总是笑了。但是、餐厅没有提供一份兼职工作,这使我们感到害羞,但我们不放弃,所以我们找了一份工作,在那里facyory玩具,我们只是想把这个标记在小轿车或其他玩具。有时候我们能帮助其他工人使垃圾黑板。这是很有趣的。正如我们所知,玩具,工厂被介绍到国外.WO…它是凉爽的。我的玩具,将被派往其他地方。我认为这很美妙。尽管我们做这项工作,是件容易的事,所以我是好的越来越幸福,更努力学习。最后,老板给很骄傲的我们一些额外的!
有很多词用法不对，我就乱翻译一下。见笑见笑。

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