这篇文章求修改,英语这个文章求修改到600字以上,一定要加一些哈利波特在学校的冒险,还要哈利的简介,全要英语的.谢了 文章：My name is Harry James Potter, I am eleven years old. Myparents died when I was on

这篇文章求修改,英语这个文章求修改到600字以上,一定要加一些哈利波特在学校的冒险,还要哈利的简介,全要英语的.谢了 文章：My name is Harry James Potter, I am eleven years old. Myparents died when I was on
这篇文章求修改,英语
这个文章求修改到600字以上,一定要加一些哈利波特在学校的冒险,还要哈利的简介,全要英语的.谢了
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My name is Harry James Potter, I am eleven years old. Myparents died when I was one year old, killed by a man called Lord Voldemort, atGodric’s Hollow. I have no grandparents, so after my parents death I was sentto my mother's muggle sister Aunt Petunia Dursley. She lived with her husbandUncle Vernon Dursley, and her son which is my cousin named Dudley Dursley.They always move their house, first we lived in four Privet Drive, then movedto Little Whinging, at last to Surrey. They never loved me, neither do I. I hadtwo best friends called Hermione and Ron,I loved them alot. I also got agodfather his name was Sirius Black, he was a nice person, he told me that I amtruly father's son and that made me really happy. I had a owl pet before calledHedwig but he died in 1997 in a battle. To tell the truth, when I was young theonly thing that I liked for my appearance was this scar on my forehead, becauseits shaped like a bolt of lightning. But its not that good for having this scarsince everybody knew me once they see it, I knew that it was not an ordinarycut afterwards. That's what I got when a powerful, evil curse touched me --took care of my mother and father, but it didn't work on me, and that's why Iam that famous. While in school, I decided I wanted to be an Auror, and my wishdid come true. After Voldemort was killed, new Minister of Magic KingsleyShacklebolt asked me to become an Auror. I reformed the Auror Department andbecame its Head in 2007.

这篇文章求修改,英语这个文章求修改到600字以上,一定要加一些哈利波特在学校的冒险,还要哈利的简介,全要英语的.谢了 文章：My name is Harry James Potter, I am eleven years old. Myparents died when I was on
My name is Harry James Potter, I am eleven years old. Myparents died when I was one year old, killed by a man called Lord Voldemort, atGodric’s Hollow. I have no grandparents, so after my parents death I was sentto my mother's muggle sister Aunt Petunia Dursley. She lived with her husbandUncle Vernon Dursley, and her son which is my cousin named Dudley Dursley.They always move their house, first we lived in four Privet Drive, then movedto Little Whinging, at last to Surrey. They never loved me, neither do I. I hadtwo best friends called Hermione and Ron,I loved them alot. I also got agodfather his name was Sirius Black, he was a nice person, he told me that I amtruly father's son and that made me really happy. I had a owl pet before calledHedwig but he died in 1997 in a battle. To tell the truth, when I was young theonly thing that I liked for my appearance was this scar on my forehead, becauseits shaped like a bolt of lightning. But its not that good for having this scarsince everybody knew me once they see it, I knew that it was not an ordinarycut afterwards. That's what I got when a powerful, evil curse touched me --took care of my mother and father, but it didn't work on me, and that's why Iam that famous. While in school, I decided I wanted to be an Auror, and my wishdid come true. After Voldemort was killed, new Minister of Magic KingsleyShacklebolt asked me to become an Auror. I reformed the Auror Department andbecame its Head in 2007.
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