求英语自我简介请将这篇简介用高级的表达方式改写一遍,要求句子通顺,有文采,遵循原文大意,可适当删减添加,字数不宜过多.原文如下：My name isXXX,presently attending XXX school.I love languages and cult

求英语自我简介请将这篇简介用高级的表达方式改写一遍,要求句子通顺,有文采,遵循原文大意,可适当删减添加,字数不宜过多.原文如下：My name isXXX,presently attending XXX school.I love languages and cult
求英语自我简介
请将这篇简介用高级的表达方式改写一遍,要求句子通顺,有文采,遵循原文大意,可适当删减添加,字数不宜过多.原文如下：
My name isXXX,presently attending XXX school.
I love languages and cultures.I like talking with different people from different countries so that I can learn a lot from them and enrich my experience.
I have a lot of hobbies,like listening to the music,drawing.singing and swimming .In this way,I've improved myself a lot.
My favourite motto is," DO what you can with what you have ,where
you are.'' As this motto goes,I'll follow my dream and pull out the stops.
请英语高手赐教!这是要用来参加英语口语比赛的,所以写得要足够给评委留下好印象
我还是需要一个比较正式的自我介绍，句子还是需要更高级一些～太口语了也不好啊 不过 还要通顺～可以再加上“我想将中国文化介绍给世界”这一类的话～

求英语自我简介请将这篇简介用高级的表达方式改写一遍,要求句子通顺,有文采,遵循原文大意,可适当删减添加,字数不宜过多.原文如下：My name isXXX,presently attending XXX school.I love languages and cult
比较正式吧,稍长了一点.
楼主自己再顺顺吧
Good morning.I am glad to be here for this interview.First let me introduce myself.My name is..presently attending XXX school.
I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.I have broad interests to fill my spare time like many other youngers.I love reading books,especially those about history,in which area my interest is not simply dabbling,but with some deeper thoughts．In addition,I'm even mad at music and sports which enrich my mind and strengthen my body；Frequently I exchange ideas with other people by making comments in the forum on line.
I always believe that " Do what you can with what you have ,where you are." One will easily lag behind unless he keeps on striving,that is what strongly supports me through those troubles that nearly drag me down.
With all my enthusiasm,passion,energy and aspiration,I have a dream of being the bridge between Chinese culture and the whole outside world and telling those who want to know more about this one of the world's oldest culture that our country is stepping firmly toward the modern society and toward a new phase of history.
Thank you for your attention.

我做了一些修改,基于的原则是:简洁,流畅,口语化,没有明显的语法错误.希望对你能有所帮助.
I am XXX, a student from XXX school.
I love to study languages and cultures.I am interested in talking with different people from different count...

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我做了一些修改,基于的原则是:简洁,流畅,口语化,没有明显的语法错误.希望对你能有所帮助.
I am XXX, a student from XXX school.
I love to study languages and cultures.I am interested in talking with different people from different countries, so that I can learn a lot from them and enrich my experience.
I have many hobbies, for example, listening to music, drawing,singing, swimming, and so on. By this way,I've been improving myself a lot.
My favourite motto is," Do what you can with what you have ,where
you are.'' As this motto goes, I'll try my best to chase & attain my dream.

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