谁来帮我改一下英语作文Yesterday was Children's Day.I went on a school trip.We visited the museum of history.It was interesting.We went there by bus.On the bus,I talked with my classmate.Time goes quickly.I got to the museum.At the museum o
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谁来帮我改一下英语作文Yesterday was Children's Day.I went on a school trip.We visited the museum of history.It was interesting.We went there by bus.On the bus,I talked with my classmate.Time goes quickly.I got to the museum.At the museum o
谁来帮我改一下英语作文
Yesterday was Children's Day.I went on a school trip.We visited the museum of history.It was interesting.We went there by bus.On the bus,I talked with my classmate.Time goes quickly.I got to the museum.At the museum of history,I saw a lot about history and the guide tell us about history'stories.I learn a lot.I took a lot of great photos.It was time to go.I bought some lovely gifts for my parent.The gifts are cheap.All in all,it was an exciting Children's Day.
谁来帮我改一下英语作文Yesterday was Children's Day.I went on a school trip.We visited the museum of history.It was interesting.We went there by bus.On the bus,I talked with my classmate.Time goes quickly.I got to the museum.At the museum o
classmate 改为 classmates or a classmate.
tell 改成told
Learn 改成learned
parent 改成parents
Time went quickly.
the guide told us
I learned a lot
parents
learn改为learned