改过去式My summer vacationSummer is the best time of the year.Long summer months do not have to go to school,and I could do what he wanted.In the summer,I'm free like a birdie.During the summer,I relax by watching TV,and Internet.I often travel w

改过去式My summer vacationSummer is the best time of the year.Long summer months do not have to go to school,and I could do what he wanted.In the summer,I'm free like a birdie.During the summer,I relax by watching TV,and Internet.I often travel w
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My summer vacation
Summer is the best time of the year.Long summer months do not have to go to school,and I could do what he wanted.In the summer,I'm free like a birdie.
During the summer,I relax by watching TV,and Internet.I often travel with his family.However,during the summer,I do not just play.I take full advantage of the spare time to learn more knowledge.For example,this summer,I read a lot of extracurricular books,which I learned a lot of knowledge; And,I also learned how to swim.
This summer,I have been very happy.
将这篇文章改成过去式.

改过去式My summer vacationSummer is the best time of the year.Long summer months do not have to go to school,and I could do what he wanted.In the summer,I'm free like a birdie.During the summer,I relax by watching TV,and Internet.I often travel w
第一段错误分析：Summer is the best time of the year.(缺介词) Long summer months（缺主语）do not have to go to school,and I could （时态错）do what he (主语不一致) wanted（时态又错）.In the summer,I'm free like a birdie.（birdie有高尔夫“小鸟球”之意,还是bird好一点）
第一段修改：Summer is the best time of the year.During long summer months I do not have to go to school,and I can do what I want.In summer,I'm free like a bird.
(这段中,没有把is 改成 was没有把do 改成did 是因为你要说的是自己对夏天的一种持久性的感受,而非过去.)
第二段修改：During this summer,I (relaxed) by watching TV and surfing on the Internet.I (travelled) with my family.However,I did not just play.I (took) full advantage of the spare time to learn much more knowledge.For example,this summer,I read a lot of extracurricular books from which I learned much knowledge.Moreover,I also learned how to swim.
(这段开始讲述这个夏天,使用过去时态.Internet 不能用 watch ,所以改成动词 surf ,surf on the Internet 意为 网上冲浪,上网."often"表示的是一种经常性的动作,不能用在过去时里,因此删去.其他动词改一下过去时态就OK.)
第三段修改：In this summer,I (was) very happy.

My summer vacation

Summer is the best time of the year. long summer months do not have to go to school, and I could do what he wanted. In the summer, I'm free like a birdie.

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My summer vacation

Summer is the best time of the year. long summer months do not have to go to school, and I could do what he wanted. In the summer, I'm free like a birdie.

During the summer, I relaxed by watching TV,and Internet. I often travelled with his family. However, during the summer,I didn't just paly, I took full advantage of the spare time to learn more knowledge. For example, the summer, I read a lot of extracurricular books, which I leaned a lot of knowledge. And, I also learned how to swin.

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My summer vacation

Summer was the best time of the year. Long summer months did not have to go to school, and I could do what he wanted. In the summer, I was free like a birdie.

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My summer vacation

Summer was the best time of the year. Long summer months did not have to go to school, and I could do what he wanted. In the summer, I was free like a birdie.

During the summer, I relaxed by watching TV, and Internet. I often traveled with his family. However, during the summer, I didnot just play. I took full advantage of the spare time to learn more knowledge. For example, this summer, I read a lot of extracurricular books, which I learned a lot of knowledge; And, I also learned how to swim.

This summer, I had been very happy

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