改英语句子.我真的不知道这些哪儿错了..（1）We have made friends with each other for three months,but I didn't think of ask you your birthday.(2)But I know now.(3)Thank you for considering send a gift to me!(4)My school is not a girl

改英语句子.我真的不知道这些哪儿错了..（1）We have made friends with each other for three months,but I didn't think of ask you your birthday.(2)But I know now.(3)Thank you for considering send a gift to me!(4)My school is not a girl
改英语句子.我真的不知道这些哪儿错了..
（1）We have made friends with each other for three months,but I didn't think of ask you your birthday.
(2)But I know now.
(3)Thank you for considering send a gift to me!
(4)My school is not a girls' school,I mean in my class only one in three are boys.
(5) I become more like a talker in the e-mail.
(6)I totally agree with you,more I trying speak in front of others,more relax I feel.
改得好,

改英语句子.我真的不知道这些哪儿错了..（1）We have made friends with each other for three months,but I didn't think of ask you your birthday.(2)But I know now.(3)Thank you for considering send a gift to me!(4)My school is not a girl
（1）交朋友是一瞬间的动作,不能持续3个月,didn't 是过去式,不妥,of是介词,后面不能动词原形,要ing,因此,改正如下：
We have been friends for three months,but I never think of asking you for your birthday.
(2)这个从语法角度讲没错.不知道你know啥了,不便修改.
（3）意思我明白,但英语里面就不用说conside了.改正如下：
Thank you for sending a gift to me!
（4）我学校不是女校,班里有3分之一是男的.改成：
I don't attend a girl school.Indeed,one third of my classmates are boys.
(5)我在邮件里更像个谈话者.改成：
I behave more like a talker in the e-mail.
(6)我完全同意.在别人面前说得越多就越自在是吧,改成：
I totally agree with you.这个不用改,但英文不用逗号分隔,用句号.
If I practise speaking in front of others more,I'll become much less nervous.
改成“多练习在很多人面前讲话就可以没那么紧张”,按照你原本那样会有歧义,人家会以为你很享受在别人面前讲话.

1 ask改成asking of后面加动名词，
2but改成and
3 send改成sending consider doing sth
4 i前面加上and 两个句子不能同时出现而没有连词。
5 like改成of
6the more ，the more
望采纳，谢谢！

(1)我们相识三个月,但是我没有想到问你你的生日。
　　(2)但我知道现在。
　　(3)感谢你考虑发送一个礼物给我!
　　(4)我的学校不是一个女子学校,我的意思是我班上只有一个在三个是男孩。
　　(5)我变得更像一个空谈者的电子邮件。
　　(6)我完全同意你的观点,更多的我在别人面前说话,我感觉更放松...

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(1)我们相识三个月,但是我没有想到问你你的生日。
　　(2)但我知道现在。
　　(3)感谢你考虑发送一个礼物给我!
　　(4)我的学校不是一个女子学校,我的意思是我班上只有一个在三个是男孩。
　　(5)我变得更像一个空谈者的电子邮件。
　　(6)我完全同意你的观点,更多的我在别人面前说话,我感觉更放松

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1）ask
3)send
6)trying

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