请英语高手指点这篇文章（从用词,语法的运用上进行修改,Nowadays,many people have forgotten what the spirit of Lei Feng is,but many others also hold that we should learn from Lei Feng.Lei Feng,born in1940,died in 1962,is the exam

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请英语高手指点这篇文章（从用词,语法的运用上进行修改,Nowadays,manypeoplehaveforgottenwhatthespiritofLeiFengis,butmanyothersals

请英语高手指点这篇文章（从用词,语法的运用上进行修改,Nowadays,many people have forgotten what the spirit of Lei Feng is,but many others also hold that we should learn from Lei Feng.Lei Feng,born in1940,died in 1962,is the exam
请英语高手指点这篇文章（从用词,语法的运用上进行修改,
Nowadays,many people have forgotten what the spirit of Lei Feng is,but many others also hold that we should learn from Lei Feng.
Lei Feng,born in1940,died in 1962,is the example of helping others without asking their rewards.
I think the spirit of Lei Feng should be learned and practiced especially in modern times because there are so many unpleasant examples which is against the spirit.For example,we know Xiao Yueyue Event.A little girl was run time and time again but nobody even want to offer help.I think this is the disaster of human’s character.
As we know,helping others is a kind of virtue which can make the world better and better.So I think we should not only learn from the spirit of Lei Feng but also practise it in our daily life.

请英语高手指点这篇文章（从用词,语法的运用上进行修改,Nowadays,many people have forgotten what the spirit of Lei Feng is,but many others also hold that we should learn from Lei Feng.Lei Feng,born in1940,died in 1962,is the exam
1,is AN example of helping others without asking their rewards.
2,unpleasant examples which ARE against the spirit
3,For example,we know Xiao Yueyue Event.A little girl was runING time and time again but nobody even wantED to help.
4,As we knowN
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整个文章中中文痕迹太重,少用BUT Because I THINK之类的话,都是中文思维.

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改正如下：
Lei Feng，who was born in1940 and died in 1962, is the example of helping others without asking their rewards.
because there are so many unpleasant examples which are found to be against the spirit.
A little girl was run over time and time again but nobody even offered help.
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many others改为more people
was run time and time again 改为was being rolled again and again
nobody even want to offer help改为nobody even helped her.
I think this is the disaster of human’s character.改为I think we the witnesses lacked humanity.

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