帮忙看下这句话哪儿错了吗?i never knew why i can not take my eyes off your face when i meet you everytime ,until today i just understood ,cuz when you turn and leave away i’ll miss you
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帮忙看下这句话哪儿错了吗?i never knew why i can not take my eyes off your face when i meet you everytime ,until today i just understood ,cuz when you turn and leave away i’ll miss you
帮忙看下这句话哪儿错了吗?
i never knew why i can not take my eyes off your face when i meet you everytime ,until today i just understood ,cuz when you turn and leave away i’ll miss you
帮忙看下这句话哪儿错了吗?i never knew why i can not take my eyes off your face when i meet you everytime ,until today i just understood ,cuz when you turn and leave away i’ll miss you
i never knew why i can not take my eyes off your face when i meet you everytime ,until today i just understood ,cuz when you turn and leave away i’ll miss you
everytime 放到when前面
understood 改成understand
understood 改成understand, 直到今天啊,所以时态错了
时态不一致,我稍微改了下,让意思更加充实。
I never knew the reason why I can't took my eyes awawy from your face when I met you everytime, until today I understand it bacause I miss you already at the moment of your leaving.
i never knew why i can not take my eyes off your face when i meet you everytime ,until today i just understood ,cuz when you turn and leave away i’ll miss you
1. knew, understood 与 can,meet 时态不一致...
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i never knew why i can not take my eyes off your face when i meet you everytime ,until today i just understood ,cuz when you turn and leave away i’ll miss you
1. knew, understood 与 can,meet 时态不一致
2. can not不可分开写,中国学生的通病,改正:书面语cannot,口语can't
3. take off不可这样使用
4. until一般与not连用
5. 作为口语句,句子太长
6. turn arond
7. leave me away
8. everytime 放到when前面
9. cuz和when同为连接词,不可连在一起使用
I never knew why I couldn't keep my eyes off your face everytime when I met you. Today, I just understand, cuz I'll miss you when you turn around and leave me alone.
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I never knew why I could not take my eyes away from your face when we met until I found I would miss you when you turned around and left me alone
knew, understood 与 can,meet 时态不一致
意思是明明白白的,我们看看如何完善。
I never knew why I can not take my eyes off you when I was with you eachtime,until today I just understand,I miss you every minute when you are not with me.