我写的英语作文.求挑错开头结尾略.题目是‘how to learn English'The first one is listening to the teacher carefully in class .It's the most important thing .But I think you cannot remember all what the teacher said .So you must write

我写的英语作文.求挑错开头结尾略.题目是‘how to learn English'The first one is listening to the teacher carefully in class .It's the most important thing .But I think you cannot remember all what the teacher said .So you must write
我写的英语作文.求挑错
开头结尾略.题目是‘how to learn English'
The first one is listening to the teacher carefully in class .It's the most important thing .But I think you cannot remember all what the teacher said .So you must write down something important in your notebook .If you learn new words and expressions ,try to use them to make sentences.What should we do after class It's easy.You can watch English programs and read English magazines or nespapers,and try to understand them.It's important to remember:the harder you do,the better you get!
问题主要在But I think you cannot remember all what the teacher said .中的定语从句,If you learn new words and expressions ,try to use them to make sentences.的两个不定式,It's important to remember:the harder you do,the better you get!中的the ＋比较级的用法,我只要语法方面的建议,

我写的英语作文.求挑错开头结尾略.题目是‘how to learn English'The first one is listening to the teacher carefully in class .It's the most important thing .But I think you cannot remember all what the teacher said .So you must write
The first one【改成thing】 is listening to the teacher carefully in class .It's the most important thing .But【I don't think you can】 remember all what the teacher said .So you must write down something important in 【on】your notebook .If you learn new words and expressions ,try to use them to make 【to make建议改成in 简洁点】sentences.What should we do after class It's easy.You can watch English programs and read English magazines or nespapers【错别字】,and try to understand them.It's important to remember【remember 建议改成bear in mind】:the harder you do,the better you get!【建议改成the harder you try,the better you will be】

all what the teacher said--said改为say 没有表达过去时态的必要

magazines or nespapers ， 报纸不可数哦 你会改吧 哈

the harder you do， do改为 study就好 更准确表达

其他没什么问题

The first one is listening to the teacher carefully in class .

• The first one is listening to teacher carefully in class .

It's the most important thing .

But I think you cannot remember all what the teacher said .

• But I don't think you can remember all what the teacher said .

So you must write down something important in your notebook .

• So you must make notes.

If you learn new words and expressions ,try to use them to make sentences.

• If you want to learn new words and expressions ,try to use them to make sentences.

What should we do after class ? It's easy.

You can watch English programs and read English magazines or nespapers,and try to understand them.

It's important to remember:the harder you do,the better you get!

• It's important to remember:the harder you work,the better your results will be!

 remember: getting better means recovery from a health problem

问题主要在But I think you cannot remember all what the teacher said .中的定语从句，If you learn new words and expressions ,try to use them to make sentences.