作文求修改,请按照高考25分要求Whether to buy insuranceNowadays,many schools advise their students to buy insurance,but somebody is for ,somebody is against .I have bought insurance .Based on many people’s opinion ,buying insurance is ne
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作文求修改,请按照高考25分要求Whether to buy insuranceNowadays,many schools advise their students to buy insurance,but somebody is for ,somebody is against .I have bought insurance .Based on many people’s opinion ,buying insurance is ne
作文求修改,请按照高考25分要求
Whether to buy insurance
Nowadays,many schools advise their students to buy insurance,but somebody is for ,somebody is against .
I have bought insurance .Based on many people’s opinion ,buying insurance is necessary.we can’t foresee when the accident will happen and whether we will get hurt in the accident.If someone get hurt in an accident,insurance can pay for his medicial expense so his family members won’t need to worry about the operation which is of a high price.
Based on my experience,i’m for buying insurance.I was hurt when i was playing basketball in the junior high school.To treat my hurt,it needs a expensive cost .But i paid little because of the insurance.
Generely speaking ,buying insurance have a lot of advantages and even no disadvantages.you won’t regret when you get an unexpected hurt.
作文求修改,请按照高考25分要求Whether to buy insuranceNowadays,many schools advise their students to buy insurance,but somebody is for ,somebody is against .I have bought insurance .Based on many people’s opinion ,buying insurance is ne
我不是老师哈,今年才高考完.
"but somebody is for ,somebody is against ".
可以加一个concerning this phenomenon,some students are for it,while the others disagree.
按照套路来说哈,既然你第一段说了有人支持,有人不反对,下面就是支持的原因和反对的原因才对,你整篇文章只说了你的经历和支持的一个原因,就是可以在事故发生时给以帮助.
这样结构不完整,原因也不充分.
分数多少我也记不清评分标准了.
高考就是一个套路问题.
你语法和短语没啥问题,行文很流畅,高考的时候尽量用些你熟悉的又比较复杂的搭配和短语、句式什么的~~~
平时多找点这种,然后反复运用,就熟练了~~
加油哈~~~