英语作文修改,Susan was a pupil of the school of the air.It took her five mintues to walk across her farm to get school.The school days lasted from 8:45 to 12:00.The number of 12 pupil inthe school.The school had some advantages.There was few pu

英语作文修改,Susan was a pupil of the school of the air.It took her five mintues to walk across her farm to get school.The school days lasted from 8:45 to 12:00.The number of 12 pupil inthe school.The school had some advantages.There was few pu
英语作文修改,
Susan was a pupil of the school of the air.It took her five mintues to walk across her farm to get school.The school days lasted from 8:45 to 12:00.The number of 12 pupil inthe school.The school had some advantages.There was few pupils in class.She cuold use the telephone and internet to communicate with her teacher.She also spent lots of time outside in nature and with animals.There was no traffic and no noise.Certainly it had some disadvantages.Susan did not have many fruends.She could not study lots of subjects.She only talked to the teacher once a week.It was difficult to understand everthing.There were few activities after school.Sometimes she played football on the farm,help out at home and reading.

英语作文修改,Susan was a pupil of the school of the air.It took her five mintues to walk across her farm to get school.The school days lasted from 8:45 to 12:00.The number of 12 pupil inthe school.The school had some advantages.There was few pu
1.The number of 12 pupil inthe school.
改为：
There were 12 pupils in the school.
3.fruends
改为：friends
3.help out at home and reading.
改为：helped out at home and read by herself.

我一句句说，不对的地方还请指正。
the school 改用不定冠词a；前文没说是哪个学校
get school加介词to；get是不及物动词，和名词接要加介词，HOME不用
school days 改schooltime；这个不是很确定，school days是学生时代，不知有没别的意思，感觉不太通schooltime是上课时间
12 pupil 改pupils；...

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我一句句说，不对的地方还请指正。
the school 改用不定冠词a；前文没说是哪个学校
get school加介词to；get是不及物动词，和名词接要加介词，HOME不用
school days 改schooltime；这个不是很确定，school days是学生时代，不知有没别的意思，感觉不太通schooltime是上课时间
12 pupil 改pupils；
internet 前加the；
and with animals去掉and；感觉不改似乎也行
Susan did not have many fruends应该是friends；
few activities 改为many；后文写了很多活动
help out 改为helped

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