请看下面这句英语语法有什么不对么?请纠正下,this is what I have heard so far the most happy discourse is the most beautiful words now,so I feel very happy,It gives me positive energy,and inspires me forward!“只要我累了，渴

请看下面这句英语语法有什么不对么?请纠正下,this is what I have heard so far the most happy discourse is the most beautiful words now,so I feel very happy,It gives me positive energy,and inspires me forward!“只要我累了，渴
请看下面这句英语语法有什么不对么?请纠正下,
this is what I have heard so far the most happy discourse is the most beautiful words now,so I feel very happy,It gives me positive energy,and inspires me forward!
“只要我累了，渴了，饿了，我就会想起你”，这是我迄今为止听到最幸福的话语也是最美好的话语，因此我感到我很幸福，它给了我正能量，激励着我前进！

请看下面这句英语语法有什么不对么?请纠正下,this is what I have heard so far the most happy discourse is the most beautiful words now,so I feel very happy,It gives me positive energy,and inspires me forward!“只要我累了，渴
This is what I have heard so far,the happiest discourse is the most beautiful words now,so I feel very happy,It gives me positive energy,and inspires me to go forward!
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This is the happiest and the most beautiful words I heard so far,so I feel that I am so happy.It gave me positive power/energy and inspire me to go forward.

It is the most beautiful words that I have heard so far for the most happy discourse, so It makes very happy with positive energy and great inspiration.
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首先，happy的最高级是the happiest，而不是the most happy
然后，第一句最好去掉this is，去掉后便是一个完整的句子主谓宾都齐全，不去则结构混乱了
接着，what与the happiest discourse结构重复了
所以，我觉得要改为：
The happiest discourse (that) I have heard so f...

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首先，happy的最高级是the happiest，而不是the most happy
然后，第一句最好去掉this is，去掉后便是一个完整的句子主谓宾都齐全，不去则结构混乱了
接着，what与the happiest discourse结构重复了
所以，我觉得要改为：
The happiest discourse (that) I have heard so far is the most beautiful words now, so I feel very happy，It gives me positive energy, and inspires me forward!

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When I felt tired, thirsty, hungry, I thought of you, this is the most happiest and beautiful discourse that I have ever heard. I feel very happy, it give me positive energy and inspires me forward.额，...

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When I felt tired, thirsty, hungry, I thought of you, this is the most happiest and beautiful discourse that I have ever heard. I feel very happy, it give me positive energy and inspires me forward.

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"I will always think of you whenever I am tired, thirsty or hungry" --- it is the happiest and most beautiful words I have ever heard so far, which make me very happy. It gives me positive energy and inspires me forward.

this is the happiest discourse that I have heard as the most beautiful words so far .So I feel very happy.It gives me positive energy, and inspires me forward!