求.求.求.帮看下这篇200词英语文章有木有语法问题!——————————————When I was five years oid,my anut gave me "Green Fairy" .I was very happy .Taht is my first book.but I was too yound to understanding of the

求.求.求.帮看下这篇200词英语文章有木有语法问题!——————————————When I was five years oid,my anut gave me "Green Fairy" .I was very happy .Taht is my first book.but I was too yound to understanding of the
求.求.求.帮看下这篇200词英语文章有木有语法问题!——————————————
When I was five years oid,my anut gave me "Green Fairy" .I was very happy .Taht is my first book.but I was too yound to understanding of the word.So my mother tolk me those story when I was little.Now I am a student.I have been reading book myself.It is important to read book for student.That will help us to better learning.My favorite book is " Thousand and One Nights" .This is my mother gave me on my tenth Children's Day,and this book teached me a lot of sense.that is all.

求.求.求.帮看下这篇200词英语文章有木有语法问题!——————————————When I was five years oid,my anut gave me "Green Fairy" .I was very happy .Taht is my first book.but I was too yound to understanding of the
When I was five years old,my aunt gave me a book named "Green Fairy" .I was very happy .That was my first book.But I was too young to understand the words in it.So my mother read those stories to me .Now I am a student.I have been reading books by myself.It is important to read as a student.That will help us about better learning.My favorite book is "Arabian Nights"(一千零一夜) .This was given to me by my mother on my tenth Children's Day,and this book taught me a lot of senses.That is all.

Taht yound tolk 拼写错误
my anut gave me "Green Fairy" 不知道"Green Fairy"是什么？应该加个the比较好吧 如果是书应加the book比较好
understanding of the word可改为understand the words
those story 注意使用复数 stories
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Taht yound tolk 拼写错误
my anut gave me "Green Fairy" 不知道"Green Fairy"是什么？应该加个the比较好吧 如果是书应加the book比较好
understanding of the word可改为understand the words
those story 注意使用复数 stories
when I was little.与上一句的I was too young 重复
a student在student前加个修饰词比较好 中学生还是小学生
.I have been reading book myself 表达不是很好，可改为I can read on my own
to better learning 改成learn better 吧 to不加
This is my mother gave me on my tenth Children's Day 可以在is 后面加the book 不然句子语法不通
and this book teached me a lot of sense.把this book 用it代替 把of sense删掉
能力有限 只能简单的这么改了

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When I was five years old ,my anut gave me "Green Fairy" .I was very happy . Taht is my first book. but I was too young to understandsome words. So my mother told me those stories when I was little. ...

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When I was five years old ,my anut gave me "Green Fairy" .I was very happy . Taht is my first book. but I was too young to understandsome words. So my mother told me those stories when I was little. Now I am a student.I have been reading book myself.It is important for a student to read a book .That will help us to learn better .My favorite book is " Thousand and One Nights" .My mother gave me on my tenth Children's Day,and this book taught me a lot . That is all.

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