自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have not contact with each other.I fell she become a girl who is so snobbish.

自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have not contact with each other.I fell she become a girl who is so snobbish.
自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.
I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have not contact with each other.I fell she become a girl who is so snobbish.

自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have not contact with each other.I fell she become a girl who is so snobbish.
首先,as换成because,因为because表示原因的时候语气最强烈,原因最显而易见
其次,we have not contact with each other改成we haven't been contacting with each other,因为就算你要用完成时也应该是contacted而不是原型,这里我用的现在完成进行时是表示一个动作或者状态持续到现在
最后,fell是跌倒的意思,显然你是词形记错了,根据你主句的时态,这里改成fell,
再就是时态有问题become改成becomes
楼主,加油吧,学英语是个漫长的过程

I am really disappointed because I had a friend before but now we don't contact with each other. I feel she has become a girl who is so snobbish.我觉得你这句话读起来很奇怪，时态不是搞的特别清楚，最好可以加点时间副词。不知道这样你觉得怎么样、

I am really disappointed now,as I had a best friend but we have not contacted with each other. Because I think(feel--felt;fall--fell)she has become a so nobbish.girl.(没有必要用定语从句)

有好几处语法错误
as 最好改成 since 或because
but now we have not contact with each other
建议改成 but now we don't have any contact with each other
或者but we haven't contact with each other for a long time.
fell 改成feel
整句建议
I think she has become a snobbish girl

你好。有错。以下句子你可以参考使用：
I feel really concerned about my friend. She and I haven't contacted each other for a long time. I do think of her , and i don't know how she is. Perhaps I should have contacte...

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你好。有错。以下句子你可以参考使用：
I feel really concerned about my friend. She and I haven't contacted each other for a long time. I do think of her , and i don't know how she is. Perhaps I should have contacted her long ago.
------还有，交往是互相的。你可以先找她联系呀，主动不是坏事。干嘛一定要别人先联系你啊？你为什麼认为她现在snobbish了？就因为没有同你联系吗？

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1 had改为 have 理由 你现在还认为她是你的朋友，应当用一般现在时。
2 contact 改为contacted 理由 现在完成时应当用 have done的形式，即动词必须用过去分词。
其余的没看出什么，供参考。

没语法错误

有语法错哦，
原句：I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have not contact with each other. I fell she become a girl who is so snobbish.
have not contact 应改成have no contact
fell 是fa...

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有语法错哦，
原句：I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have not contact with each other. I fell she become a girl who is so snobbish.
have not contact 应改成have no contact
fell 是fall的过去时，应该改成feel， 这个词才是感觉的意思
feel后面的从句 要么用she becomes 要么用she has become 这样语法才对。
然后从句其实有点多余。
改完语法错后：I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have no contact with each other. I feel that she has become a girl who is so snobbish.
再提炼一下：
I am really disappointed because I am no longer in contact with one of my friends, since she has become a very snobbish girl.

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