When I want to do one thing which is very important to me,I will eliminate all of the obsacles about that.求教这句话在英语的表达习惯和语法上有没有任何错误,50分,也就有就这么多了
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When I want to do one thing which is very important to me,I will eliminate all of the obsacles about that.求教这句话在英语的表达习惯和语法上有没有任何错误,50分,也就有就这么多了
When I want to do one thing which is very important to me,I will eliminate all of the obsacles about that.
求教这句话在英语的表达习惯和语法上有没有任何错误,50分,也就有就这么多了
When I want to do one thing which is very important to me,I will eliminate all of the obsacles about that.求教这句话在英语的表达习惯和语法上有没有任何错误,50分,也就有就这么多了
be important to sb.:……对sb.而言是很重要的,强调对某人很重要的东西.
be important for sb.（to do sth.）：某人……是很重要的,强调做某事对某人的重要性.
所以应该使用important for
2.for 带有目的性和针对性的,对于/关于某事/某人/某物,即for sb./sth.
例如：an instrument for measuring pressure
测压力用的仪器
That will be bad for your health.
那将有损于你的健康.
A letter for you!
你的信!
[表示愿望、爱好、特长等]对于,倾向于
long for freedom
渴望自由
have a liking for music
爱好音乐
an eye for beauty
审美的眼光
to 就是 什么东西 TO什么
什么 to me对于我 这些你要看语境
about 指代关于某件事情,某个事物,即about sth.
所以最好使用for that/it
综上,这句话的最好表述是：
When I want to do one thing which is very important for me,I will eliminate all of the obsacles for it/that.
把about 换成in front of，意思是“我会清除掉它前面的所有障碍，”而不是关于它的障碍。
但我觉得写的很好！没有语法错误~~O(∩_∩)O
也许这样说会好些：
When I want to do anything which is very important to me,I will eliminate all the obsacles that keep me out of it.
这样的句子不太容易得高分，前面的从句部分过长，会显得头重脚轻，语法上倒没什么错误，只是个人觉得最后的代词that改为it比较好，代指one thing
When I want to do an important thing to me, I will eliminate all the obscales of it.
前半句基本没问题。后半句建议改为：I will remove all obstacles to it (that thing). (建议不要用eliminate，太正式了，如果你是书面作文那就无所谓)。