谁能帮我润色这样一篇英文双人演讲稿?Love in the shining summer Ladies and Gentlemen! We are glad to stand here to give a speech about love in the shining summer. I dare to bet that when you catch the first sigh

谁能帮我润色这样一篇英文双人演讲稿?Love in the shining summer Ladies and Gentlemen! We are glad to stand here to give a speech about love in the shining summer. I dare to bet that when you catch the first sigh
谁能帮我润色这样一篇英文双人演讲稿?
Love in the shining summer
 Ladies and Gentlemen!
 We are glad to stand here to give a speech about love in the shining summer.
 I dare to bet that when you catch the first sight of the tittle,you must think of the love between valentines and your mind must be filled up with sweet expectations of the love in the shining summer.
 Actually that kind of love is only a small part of love.We should learn to balance different loves and try to spread it to everyone around us.If you can do it like this,this summer will be certainly different.
 Firstly the love to your parents seems to be compulsory.We have found that many of us have generation gaps with parents.And the depressing result is,sometimes we can’t smelt their parental lone by heart and can’t express our love to them,too.这里可以加一些东西 Why don’t you change yourself in this shining summer?Making a phone call or writing a long letter is enough.Talk about your love to them sincerely.I’m sure when they get the love from you,they must laugh with tears.
 Secondly,the love to your friends makes your life sweet as honey.When we have psychological problems,most of us aren’t willing to tell our parents.We often turn to our good friends to share our happiness and sorrow.The priority is we spent almost every moment with friends seems to be a mirror.They reflect what kind of person you are.You laugh to them,and they laugh back to you.You love them.They give you hot love,too.这里可以加一些东西So why don’t you change yourself in this shining summer?Love your friends,respect your friends and accept their love.If you do it like this,you must be much happier than ever before.
 As the famous ancient thoughter “mo-tse” said,we must “兼爱”.Mo-tse wanted to fill the world with pure love.However,I still need to add some words,listen carefully to me,If you want to spread your love to everyone,love the people around you first.When they give you their love in return for your love,such a reward will inspire you to love more people.And if everyone does it like this,just try to imagine what a wonderful world it will be!
 Ladies and gentlemen.后面结束语交给你了
这是一篇双人四分钟演讲稿，除了第一位老兄的已经很棒的答案，有没有更好的？注意，时间要刚好4分钟。

谁能帮我润色这样一篇英文双人演讲稿?Love in the shining summer Ladies and Gentlemen! We are glad to stand here to give a speech about love in the shining summer. I dare to bet that when you catch the first sigh
Love in the shining summer
Ladies and Gentlemen!
We are glad to be here,giving a speech about love in the shining summer.I bet that when you see the tittle at the first sight,it's easy to regard the love as valentines' and you will begin the imagination for sweet expectations of the love.Actually that is only one kind of love.What I want to say is the other three kinds of love-to parents,to friends and also to strangers.In daily life,we ought to pay more attention to different love and try to spread it to everyone around us.If you can do as I suggested,your life will certainly be different this summer.
Firstly,love to parents seems to be compulsory.We have found that many of us have generation gaps with parents.And as a result with depression,usually we neglect their loneliness inside the heart.As children in China,we seldom express our love to them,and maybe feel artificial and shy to express our love.Why don’t you change yourself in this shining summer?Just a phone call or a long letter is enough.Try to spare more time with them for communication and accompanying.
Moreover,say"I love you"more often and directly to them.I’m sure when they get the love sign from you,they will smile with tears.
Secondly,love to your friends makes your life as sweet as honey.When we meet psychological problems,most of us keep them in mind,not willingly to tell our parents.But we often turn to our good friends to share our happiness and sorrow.Being with friends is just like looking into the mirror.It reflects what kind of person you are.Whenever we smile or cry,they support us and will never leave us alone.But have you ever said "thank you"?Have you ever express your love to them?Of course not.So why don’t you change yourself in this shining summer?Love your friends,respect your friends and accept their love.If you do as I suggested,you will surely be much happier than before.
Last but not least,even strangers need love.With the development of our society,most of people become more and more selfish.We don't want to get any trouble by helping others or even talking with strangers.But who can help us if we meet some emergent problem,if everyone only care about himself?Absolutely none.Then,why not change yourself in this shining summer?Let's concern for others if they need help.Don't be stingy to give strangers help.You will certainly get reward sooner or later if you keep ready to help others.
Mo-tse,a famous ancient scholar,advocated us to have "big love".In his opinion,we should fill the world with pure love.However,I still need to say,listen carefully to me,if you want to gain love from others,you have to love people around you first.When they give you their love in return for your love,such a reward will inspire you to love more.And if everyone behave like this,what a wonderful world it will be!
Ladies and gentlemen,please close your eyes to feel love,it's in the air and it's everywhere.
That's all,thank you for listening.
我帮你修改了,你的用语当中有许多中国式的语言,所以我帮你改掉,尽量不要显得太洋泾浜.这么辛苦,强烈要求加分.
再次作了修改,只能这样了.