请大家帮忙修改一篇英语作文我的一篇作文 Difference between Chinese and American Social LifeAs the USA is the one and only superpower,and China is the largest developing country,there are many differences between them,and it was foun

请大家帮忙修改一篇英语作文我的一篇作文 Difference between Chinese and American Social LifeAs the USA is the one and only superpower,and China is the largest developing country,there are many differences between them,and it was foun
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Difference between Chinese and American Social Life
As the USA is the one and only superpower,and China is the largest developing country,there are many differences between them,and it was found expression in social life.
There was a story:one day,an American woman and a Chinese woman were walking in the street,they were both dressed in hat and skirt.A cold wind suddenly blew them,the American woman covered her hat in case her hat won’t be flown away,but the Chinese woman covered her skirt in case her leg will be showing.That’s the difference of the culture.China is a country with 5,000 years of civilization,the conservative ideas can’t change in one day；And the USA is a young country,it is changeable and open-minded.
There are reasons behind every life style.Some Americans said that Chinese people are so impolite; they jump the queue and spitting everywhere.Their censure is right,but they don’t know why Chinese people do that.China is a developing country with a population of over 1.5billion,there are too much people,and they have to wait to do everything,this really annoyed some of them,they break the rule,they don’t want to be polite to everybody because it will be too tired.For Americans,there are few people in their land,they don’t have to meet people when they get out of the door in the morning,meanwhile they don’t worry that their breakfast were sold out.
There is nothing wrong with both sides.As the villagers in the global village,we should learn to be open to everybody.

请大家帮忙修改一篇英语作文我的一篇作文 Difference between Chinese and American Social LifeAs the USA is the one and only superpower,and China is the largest developing country,there are many differences between them,and it was foun
Difference between Chinese and American Social Life
The United States being the one and only superpower,and China the largest developing country,there are many differences between them,and we can find quite a lot of expression differences in social life as well.
A story goes like this.One day,an American woman and a Chinese woman were walking in the street,they were both dressed in hat and skirt.A strong gust came suddenly.The American woman covered her hat in case her hat wouldn’t be blown away,but the Chinese woman covered her skirt in case her legs would not be shown.That’s one cultural difference.China is a country with 5,000 years of civilization,the conservative ideas can’t change in one day.And the United States is a young country,it is changeable and open-minded.
There are reasons behind every life style.Some Americans say that Chinese people are so impolite:they never follow rules when waiting in line and spit everywhere.
Their censure is right,but they don’t know why the Chinese people do that.China is a developing country with a population of over 1.5 billion.There are too many people,and they have to wait to do everything.This really annoyed some of them,so they break rules.They don’t want to be polite to everybody because it will be too tiresome.For Americans,there are fewer people in their country,they don’t have to meet people when they get out of the door in the morning.Meanwhile they are not worried that their breakfast would be sold out and have to go to work with an empty stomach.
There is nothing wrong for either side.As global citizens,we should learn to be open to everybody and everything.
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Difference between Chinese and American Social Life
The USA is the one and only superpower, while China is the largest developing country, there are many differences between them. One of which is their reaction in social life.
There was a story: One day, an American woman and a Chinese woman were walking on the street, both dressed in hat and skirt. A strong wind stroked, the American woman covered her hat in case her hat won’t be flown away, but the Chinese woman covered her skirt in case her leg won't be shown. That’s the difference of the culture. China is a country with 5,000 years of civilization, the conservative ideas won’t change in one day；And the USA is a young country, it is flexible and open-minded.
There are reasons behind every life style. Some Americans said that Chinese people are impolite; they cut queues and spit saliva everywhere. Their censure is right, but they don't know the story behind. China is a developing country with a population of over 1.5billion, there are too many people, and everyone has to wait to do everything, which is really annoying to some of them, thus they break the rules. Some are too tired to be polite to others, or to follow the rules set. For Americans, there are few people in their land, there won't see such a mess when they get out of their house every morning, meanwhile they don’t have to worry that their breakfast were sold out so quickly.
In my opinion, there is no wrong with both sides. As the villagers in the global village, we should learn to open ourselves for everybody.

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