英语改错 50分的.I can hardly believe so,but my high school life is almost over!I always felt excited every time i think that in a few month i will graduate from high school and go to college.the first thing what i am going to do after graduatio

英语改错 50分的.I can hardly believe so,but my high school life is almost over!I always felt excited every time i think that in a few month i will graduate from high school and go to college.the first thing what i am going to do after graduatio
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I can hardly believe so,but my high school life is almost over!I always felt excited every time i think that in a few month i will graduate from high school and go to college.the first thing what i am going to do after graduation is to take long vacation!Meanwhile,i find me looking back on the past three years and thinking about all the wonderfully things that have happened and the teachers classmates i will miss.I've decided to write them down so that on someday.when i reread them ,the good memories won't come back
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英语改错 50分的.I can hardly believe so,but my high school life is almost over!I always felt excited every time i think that in a few month i will graduate from high school and go to college.the first thing what i am going to do after graduatio
so-that
felt-feel
month-months
what-that
take long vacation-take a long vacation
me-myself
wonderfully-wonderful
the teachers classmates -the teachers and classmates
on someday- someday
won't-will

I can hardly believe so, but my hight school life is almost over! I always feel excited. Everytime i think that in a few months I will graduate from high school and go to college. the first thing what...

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I can hardly believe so, but my hight school life is almost over! I always feel excited. Everytime i think that in a few months I will graduate from high school and go to college. the first thing what i am going todo after graduation is to take a long vacation! however, i find when looking back to the past three years and thinking about all the wonderful things that have happened and the teachers classmates i will miss. i've decided to write them down so that someday when i read them the good memeries will come back.
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I can hardly believe that my high school life is almost over! I always feel excited every time I think that in a few month I will graduate from high school and go to college.The first thing what I am ...

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I can hardly believe that my high school life is almost over! I always feel excited every time I think that in a few month I will graduate from high school and go to college.The first thing what I am going to do after graduation is to take a long vacation!Meanwhile , I will be looking back in the past three years and thinking about all the wonderfuly things that have happened with the teachers and classmates I will miss. I've decided to write them down so that on someday when I reread them the good memories will came back.
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1."I can hardly believe that my..."
2."I always feel excited..."
3."the fisrt thing (that) i am going..."
4."take a long vacation"
5."looking back at the past..."
6."and think abou...

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1."I can hardly believe that my..."
2."I always feel excited..."
3."the fisrt thing (that) i am going..."
4."take a long vacation"
5."looking back at the past..."
6."and think about..."
7."all the wonderful things"
8."the teachers and classmates"
9."so that someday,when..."
10."memories will come back"

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felt→feel,
month+s,
what→that,
take后+a,
Meanwhile→However（“想…，然而发现自己却在…”，这里转折比较贴切,同意楼上的）
me→myself（后面的look back on是对的,不用at）
wonderfully→wonderful,
teachers后+and,on someday→someday
won't→will