英语翻译Attention please,everyone.We have acceptedthe weather forecast on the radio this morning thatthere will have a heavy rain tonight.Be sure shutthe windows and doors until you leave your classrooms.The sports meet that we planned to hold on

英语翻译Attention please,everyone.We have acceptedthe weather forecast on the radio this morning thatthere will have a heavy rain tonight.Be sure shutthe windows and doors until you leave your classrooms.The sports meet that we planned to hold on
英语翻译
Attention please,everyone.We have accepted
the weather forecast on the radio this morning that
there will have a heavy rain tonight.Be sure shut
the windows and doors until you leave your classrooms.
The sports meet that we planned to hold on tomorrow
will be put off.After it becomes fine,we’ll make other
announcement.We will have classes on Wednesday as usually.
Since it is colder tomorrow,please dress on more clothes in time.
Those who came to school by bike,don’t keep your umbrella
open while riding.
这是改错题,至少找出10处错误,下面是正确的
Attention,please,everyone.We have received the weather forecast on the radio this morning that there will be a heavy rain tonight.Be sure to shut the windows and doors when you leave your classrooms.The sports meet that we planned to hold tomorrow will be put off.After it becomes fine,we′ll make another announcement.We will have classes on Wednesday as usual.Since it is colder tomorrow,please put on more clothes in time.Those who come to school by bike,don′t keep your umbrellas open while riding.
我想请好心人把这篇翻译下,要正确的,然后再分析下为什么这样改,要清晰的,

英语翻译Attention please,everyone.We have acceptedthe weather forecast on the radio this morning thatthere will have a heavy rain tonight.Be sure shutthe windows and doors until you leave your classrooms.The sports meet that we planned to hold on
1.翻译：
请注意了,各位.今早我们在广播收到的天气预报说今晚将会有暴雨.当你们离开教室时,一定要把门窗关好.我们计划于明日举行的运动会将会被推迟举行.天气好转后,我们将另行通知.周三我们照常上课.因为明天天气会更加寒冷,所以请及时添加衣物.骑车上学的同学,骑车时请勿撑伞.
2.
1）accepted → received
accept表示“内心主观上接受”,而receive才表示“收到”这个动作.
2) there will have → there will be
这是there be句型的一般将来时,当然用be不用have.
3）be sure shut → be sure to shut
be sure to do sth是固定短语,意思是“一定要做某事”.
4）until → when
until要求其前面的动词shut是个延续性动词,但是shut只是一个表瞬间完成的动词,所以改用when.
5）on tomorrow → tomorrow
tomorrow是一个副词,可以单独做时间状语,而不能加上介词on.
6）other → another
other单独修饰名词,要求名词必须为复数形式.
而another意思是“另外一个”,其后接名词的单数形式.
7）usually → usual
固定短语：as usual,意思是“和/像往常一样”.
8）dress on → put on
固定短语put on,意思是“穿上”,而dress意思是“使...穿上衣服”,一般不和on连接.
9）came → come
通知里面讲述的是通常的情况,并不是讲故事,所以用一般现在时.
10）umbrella → umbrellas
主语those指多人,come也同样表明指复数,所以umbrella也对应用复数形式.总不能很多人共一把伞吧?

翻译：大家请注意，早上收听广播说今晚会有大雨。请你们离开教室的时候确保门窗以关好。原计划明天举行的运动会将延后举行，待天气转好，我们再做安排。周三照常上课。鉴于明天天气变凉，请及时添加衣物；骑车上学的同学，不要撑着伞骑车。
改错
accept 改成 receive
“receive-收到”表示“表面上、物理上”的收到，是看得见、摸得着的。
受到天气预报就用...

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翻译：大家请注意，早上收听广播说今晚会有大雨。请你们离开教室的时候确保门窗以关好。原计划明天举行的运动会将延后举行，待天气转好，我们再做安排。周三照常上课。鉴于明天天气变凉，请及时添加衣物；骑车上学的同学，不要撑着伞骑车。
改错
accept 改成 receive
“receive-收到”表示“表面上、物理上”的收到，是看得见、摸得着的。
受到天气预报就用recieve。
“accept-接受”表示“引申的、抽象的”的接受，是看不到、摸不到的。

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大家请注意：我们从收音机里得到的天气预报显示今晚将有一场大雨。当你们离开教室的时候要确定关上窗户和门。我们计划将在明天举行的运动会将推迟，天气转好后，我们会另行通知。我们在周三照常上课。因为明天天气要冷一些，请及时多穿衣服。骑自行车来学校的同学，在骑车的时候要注意不要撑开伞。
1，accept主观接受，表示主动而且高兴地接受
receive只表示被动地接受，收到但心里并不一定接受<...

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大家请注意：我们从收音机里得到的天气预报显示今晚将有一场大雨。当你们离开教室的时候要确定关上窗户和门。我们计划将在明天举行的运动会将推迟，天气转好后，我们会另行通知。我们在周三照常上课。因为明天天气要冷一些，请及时多穿衣服。骑自行车来学校的同学，在骑车的时候要注意不要撑开伞。
1，accept主观接受，表示主动而且高兴地接受
receive只表示被动地接受，收到但心里并不一定接受
2，there be句型
3，be sure to do sth固定词组
4，until,直到，通常用于not。。。 until。。。
在这里意义不符
5，held为及物动词，不需要与介词连用就能加宾语the sports meet.
6，another表示不确定的多者之一，other后需加复数名词。
7，as usual固定词组，“像往常一样”，usually,副词，经常。
8.dress后跟人 dress sb.
9.整篇文章是一般现在时和将来时，表示经常性的动作，用一般现在时come
10.由those可知，umbrella应是复数。

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