英语好的,帮我看看这篇英语短文There is a traditional festival in China called Lantern Festival.It is on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals,vegetables,fruits and many,other things.On th

英语好的,帮我看看这篇英语短文There is a traditional festival in China called Lantern Festival.It is on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals,vegetables,fruits and many,other things.On th
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There is a traditional festival in China called Lantern Festival.It is on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals,vegetables,fruits and many,other things.On the eve of Lantern Festival,all the lanterns are hung up.Many people like eating rice glue balls、watching the lion dance and guessing the riddle at the Lantern Festival.Do you know the ‘guess the riddle’?It’s a interesting game.People write the riddles on the laterns,and let others guess.The rice glue balls are traditional Chinese food.Do you like eating them?I thank them are very delicious.
帮忙看看有没有什么语法、单复数或者时态错误,修改下.最好还能把其中Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals,vegetables,fruits and many,other things.On the eve of Lantern Festival,all the lanterns are hung up.这两句改成一般现在时.

英语好的,帮我看看这篇英语短文There is a traditional festival in China called Lantern Festival.It is on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month.Lanterns are made in the shape of different animals,vegetables,fruits and many,other things.On th
There is a traditional festival in China called Lantern Festival.It is (It is held) on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month. Lanterns are made in the shape (shapes) of different animals, vegetables, fruits and many other things. On the eve of Lantern Festival, all the lanterns are hung up.(All the lanterns are hung up on the eve of Lantern Festival 建议:最好写出来挂在哪里, 例子:hung up on the wall) Many people like eating rice glue balls(glue是胶水, 不放在吃的方面, 所以改为 sticky rice balls)、watching the lion dance and guessing(trying to figure out) the riddles at(during) the Lantern Festival. Do you know the ‘guess the riddle’?(riddle已经是谜, 用guess显多余. 建议你改为: Do you know how to play the riddle game?) It’s a(an) interesting game. People write the riddles on the lanterns, and let others (others to) guess the answers. The rice glue balls(sticky rice balls) are traditional Chinese food. Do you like eating them? I thank(错字, think) them(语法错误, they) are very delicious.
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