这几句英文文法有错吗?中文是这样的：网页寄存正在转移中.龟速（意思是很慢）网站即将启动,请稍後再到访!翻译後：Web Hosting is being transferred.Turtle-speed website will be coming soon,please try again la

这几句英文文法有错吗?中文是这样的：网页寄存正在转移中.龟速（意思是很慢）网站即将启动,请稍後再到访!翻译後：Web Hosting is being transferred.Turtle-speed website will be coming soon,please try again la
这几句英文文法有错吗?
中文是这样的：
网页寄存正在转移中.
龟速（意思是很慢）网站即将启动,请稍後再到访!
翻译後：
Web Hosting is being transferred.
Turtle-speed website will be coming soon,please try again later

这几句英文文法有错吗?中文是这样的：网页寄存正在转移中.龟速（意思是很慢）网站即将启动,请稍後再到访!翻译後：Web Hosting is being transferred.Turtle-speed website will be coming soon,please try again la
第一句没问题,第二句最好不要写turtle speed,写个super slow什么的会好一点吧.website will be coming soon最好换成website will be loaded soon