求英语六级作文批改题目是waste sorting1、目前很多人扔垃圾时不分类2、由此带来的问题3、提倡垃圾分类的意义Waste SortingGenerally speaking,waste sorting means by classifying garbage based on whether these are rec

求英语六级作文批改题目是waste sorting1、目前很多人扔垃圾时不分类2、由此带来的问题3、提倡垃圾分类的意义Waste SortingGenerally speaking,waste sorting means by classifying garbage based on whether these are rec
求英语六级作文批改
题目是waste sorting
1、目前很多人扔垃圾时不分类
2、由此带来的问题
3、提倡垃圾分类的意义
Waste Sorting
Generally speaking,waste sorting means by classifying garbage based on whether these are recycled.Refuse sorting has been advocated for some years,nonetheless numerous people do not follow it.Persons do not notice that the trash is organic or inorganic,recyclable or not recyclable,when throwing rubbish,even classification dustbin can be seen everywhere.
Problems come out of garbage disposal.Landfill and incineration are the main methods.Whereas,something like Coke bottles that we discard every day,plastic bag called "white trash" or disposable plastic tableware,which is belong to polymer,is imputrescible even buried underground for 200 years.It also can make soil compaction,reduce soil fertility,and go so far as to engender soil's loss of farming ability.Incineration of garbage produce kinds of common pollutant,such as sulfur dioxide,suspended particles and oxynitride,which will bring certain harm to human body.
Refusing sorting is worth advocating for the follow reasons.First,it decreases the amount of trash over 60% by detaching substance recyclable or not degradable.Secondly,abandoned batteries contain toxic substances like mercury,cadmium,which will damage human health; waste plastic in the soil cause crop losses; accidents of animal death occur due to eating waste plastic.Therefore,waste sorting can not only reduce environmental pollution,but also protect the health of humans and animals.In addition,about 30% to 40& rubbish can be recycled in reproduction.Such turning "waste" into wealth saves many resources.

求英语六级作文批改题目是waste sorting1、目前很多人扔垃圾时不分类2、由此带来的问题3、提倡垃圾分类的意义Waste SortingGenerally speaking,waste sorting means by classifying garbage based on whether these are rec
你写的是一篇文章的全部,还是一部分?
总觉得开头的很突然,结尾的也很突然.
开头一般总得有点“引入”
结尾,总得有个结论,你写这篇文章的结论要明确的写出来,老师改卷子忙,没空细看.
英文作文就是开门见山,每段开头或结尾就要有句明显的总结该段的话,别和中文一样绕来绕去.有了中心句,再展开论述（理由）,字数不够了再添点例子.