The other day my brother and me went to the cinema by bike.My brother is riding with me sitting onthe seat behind.As we came the crossroads,a young man and a girl came up and stop us.“We’re found you at last,” they said.Or we didn’t know them

The other day my brother and me went to the cinema by bike.My brother is riding with me sitting onthe seat behind.As we came the crossroads,a young man and a girl came up and stop us.“We’re found you at last,” they said.Or we didn’t know them
The other day my brother and me went to the cinema by bike.My brother is riding with me sitting on
the seat behind.As we came the crossroads,a young man and a girl came up and stop us.“We’re found you at last,” they said.Or we didn’t know them.Pointed to a policeman not far away,a young man explained,“He stopped us about half an hour before and made us to catch he next offender.So come on!Stand here .Hope you won't have as soon as we did.Good luke 哪里有错帮忙改下

The other day my brother and me went to the cinema by bike.My brother is riding with me sitting onthe seat behind.As we came the crossroads,a young man and a girl came up and stop us.“We’re found you at last,” they said.Or we didn’t know them
The other day my brother and me（I） went to the cinema by bike.My brother is（was） riding with me sitting on the seat behind.As we came（came to） the crossroads,a young man and a girl came up and stop（stopped） us.“We’re（We've） found you at last,” they said.Or(But) we didn’t know them.Pointed(pointing) to a policeman not far away,a(the) young man explained,“He stopped us about half an hour before(ago) and made us to(去掉to) catch he（the） next offender.So come on!Stand here .Hope you won't（will） have（do） as soon as we did.Good luke

was riding with me， as we were at the crossroads好一些，你那个是错误的，stopped， we have found you应该是，or改成but， pointing应该是，主动的嘛，before改成ago，好多人这个都错啊。。。to去掉，make后面圆形啦 倒数第二句不通，应该大意是hope you won‘t wait as long as we...

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was riding with me， as we were at the crossroads好一些，你那个是错误的，stopped， we have found you应该是，or改成but， pointing应该是，主动的嘛，before改成ago，好多人这个都错啊。。。to去掉，make后面圆形啦 倒数第二句不通，应该大意是hope you won‘t wait as long as we did

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