帮我看看有没有语法错误、There is a beautiful park near my house.During the summer holiday I often go to there.The park is not veru big,but it’s very beautiful.There are lots of trees and flowers.In the summer,these trees grow very exube

帮我看看有没有语法错误、There is a beautiful park near my house.During the summer holiday I often go to there.The park is not veru big,but it’s very beautiful.There are lots of trees and flowers.In the summer,these trees grow very exube
帮我看看有没有语法错误、
There is a beautiful park near my house.During the summer holiday I often go to there.
The park is not veru big,but it’s very beautiful.There are lots of trees and flowers.In the summer,these trees grow very exuberant,It is cooler under the trees.
Oh,there is a big lake in the park .
Let’s go and have a look!
The weather was very hot.So many people go to there.They like swimming in the lake,but I think it’s very dangerous.
Ther take their dogs for a walk in the park,they all have a good time in the park.

帮我看看有没有语法错误、There is a beautiful park near my house.During the summer holiday I often go to there.The park is not veru big,but it’s very beautiful.There are lots of trees and flowers.In the summer,these trees grow very exube
第一行：去掉“to”
第四行：去掉“the”或改成“summertime”(固定搭配)
第四行：“cooler”改成“cool”
第七行：“was”改成“is”
So many people go to there中删to
(顺便提醒一下,here、there、home前面不加任何介词）

题目？？？

第一行去掉to，第二行去掉in the summer中的the，exuberant是形容词，可以把grow改成are,倒数第三行去掉to，

During the summer holiday I often go to there.
中删to.
In the summer中删the
It is cooler under the trees.中cooler改成cool
The weather was very hot中was改成is，时态要一致
So many people go to there中删to
Ther take their dogs for a walk in the park中ther改成they

第三行“exuberantly”
第六行“is”“去掉to”

There is a beautiful park near my house.During the summer holiday I often go/ there.
The park is not very big,but it’s very beautiful. There are lots of trees and flowers/in it. In this/ summer,...

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There is a beautiful park near my house.During the summer holiday I often go/ there.
The park is not very big,but it’s very beautiful. There are lots of trees and flowers/in it. In this/ summer, these trees grow very exuberant,It is cooler under the trees.
Oh,there is a big lake in the park .
Let’s go and have a look!
/when the weather is very hot so many people will go to there.They like /to swim in the lake,but I think it’s very dangerous.
They always take their dogs for a walk in the park;they all have a good time in the park.

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go to there去掉to,因为there是副词。Let’s go and have a look!改为 Let’s go there and have a look!So many people go to there.同上去掉to。Ther改为they.