求英语高手帮我修改一下这段对话望有高手能指点其中有语病地方,最好能将其中的句子换得优美一点,Q:Hi,How do you do.Is he you friend?W:YES,Is my classmates.He from Shunde where is a beautiful countryside.Q:Glad to

求英语高手帮我修改一下这段对话望有高手能指点其中有语病地方,最好能将其中的句子换得优美一点,Q:Hi,How do you do.Is he you friend?W:YES,Is my classmates.He from Shunde where is a beautiful countryside.Q:Glad to
求英语高手帮我修改一下这段对话
望有高手能指点其中有语病地方,最好能将其中的句子换得优美一点,
Q:Hi,How do you do.
Is he you friend?
W:YES,Is my classmates.
He from Shunde where is a beautiful countryside.
Q:Glad to seeing you.
I am Locker Guan.
I am YangJiang that is a wonderful city.
F:Nice to meet you,My name is Guifeng Wang
You meet my friend at morning?(指向W)
He is a very strong and like the sport.
we are crazy about table tennis.
Q：OH,I like sport too,I am crazy about table tennis too.
W:How luckly is,I am finding the friends who is crazy about table tennis.
Let's do it at tomorrow?
I have a meeting at afteroon.
F:Can't wait for tomorrow's coming

求英语高手帮我修改一下这段对话望有高手能指点其中有语病地方,最好能将其中的句子换得优美一点,Q:Hi,How do you do.Is he you friend?W:YES,Is my classmates.He from Shunde where is a beautiful countryside.Q:Glad to
Q：is he your friend?
W：Yes,he is my classmate.He is from Shunde where it is a beautiful village.
F::Glad to see you.My name is Wang Guifeng.You met my friend in the moring,didn't you He is so strong and likes sports.Also,we are crazy about table tennis.
Q:Oh,me too.
W:How lucky we are!I found friends who are on fire for table tennis.Let's play it tomorrow,shall we?
F:I can't wait for tomorrow!

Q: Hi,How do you do.
Is he your friend?
W:YES,He is my classmate.
He comes from Shunde , a beautiful countryside.
Q:Glad to see you.
I am Locker Guan.
I am from Ya...

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Q: Hi,How do you do.
Is he your friend?
W:YES,He is my classmate.
He comes from Shunde , a beautiful countryside.
Q:Glad to see you.
I am Locker Guan.
I am from YangJiang which is a wonderful city.
F:Nice to meet you,My name is Guifeng Wang
Did you meet my friend this morning?(指向W)
He is a very strong boy and likes sports.
we are crazy about table tennis.
Q：OH，so do I,I am also crazy about table tennis .
W:How lucky !I am finding the friends who are crazy about it.
Let's do it in the tomorrow?
I have a meeting in the afteroon.
F:Can't wait for tomorrow's coming !

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Q:Hi,How are you doing?(how do you do 是初次见面时说的）.
Is he you friend?
W:Yes,he is my classmate.(classmates 应该用单数形式classmate)
He come from Shunde which is a beautiful countryside.(be from...

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Q:Hi,How are you doing?(how do you do 是初次见面时说的）.
Is he you friend?
W:Yes,he is my classmate.(classmates 应该用单数形式classmate)
He come from Shunde which is a beautiful countryside.(be from 或者come from)
Q:Glad to see you. (glad to do sth)
I am Locker Guan.
I am from YangJiang that is a wonderful city. (be from 来自哪里)
F:Nice to meet you,My name is Guifeng Wang
You met my friend at morning?(指向W)(meet 改为met，meet的过去式)
He is avery strong and likes the sport.(去掉a，把like改为第三人称likes)
we are crazy about table tennis.
Q：Oh，I like sport too,I am crazy about table tennis too.
W:How lucky is,I am finding friends who are crazy about table tennis.(luckly 改为lucky；去掉the；is改为are）
Let's do it at tomorrow?
I have a meeting at afteroon.
F:Can't wait for tomorrow's coming !
希望能帮助你，谢谢！

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Q:Hi,Long time no see.
Is he your friend?
W:YES,He's my classmate.
He's from Shunde which is a beautiful countryside.
Q:Glad to see you.
I am Locker Guan.
I come from Y...

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Q:Hi,Long time no see.
Is he your friend?
W:YES,He's my classmate.
He's from Shunde which is a beautiful countryside.
Q:Glad to see you.
I am Locker Guan.
I come from YangJiang ,it's a wonderful city.
F:Nice to meet you,My name is Guifeng Wang.(Q与W是同学，对W的情况Q了解，改成F自我介绍)
I likes sports and we are crazy about table tennis.
Q：Oh，I like sports too,I am crazy about table tennis too.
W:How luckly it is!I am finding the friends whom are crazy about table tennis.
Let's make it at tomorrow,will you?
I have a meeting at this afternoon.
F:That's great!I can't wait for it!

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