请改错：Last Sunday ,we had a hiking .We went hiking at 8:00 in the morning.There are fifteen students in our team.We went to the forest.We saw a rabbit and a horse.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We were happy .
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请改错：Last Sunday ,we had a hiking .We went hiking at 8:00 in the morning.There are fifteen students in our team.We went to the forest.We saw a rabbit and a horse.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We were happy .
请改错：Last Sunday ,we had a hiking .We went hiking at 8:00 in the morning.
There are fifteen students in our team.We went to the forest.We saw a rabbit and a horse.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We were happy .
请改错：Last Sunday ,we had a hiking .We went hiking at 8:00 in the morning.There are fifteen students in our team.We went to the forest.We saw a rabbit and a horse.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We were happy .
Last Sunday ,we had a hiking .We went hiking at 8:00 in the morning
改为Last Sunday ,we had a hiking .We got start at 8:00 in the morning
觉得更好一些,此外There are fifteen students in our team.We went to the forest.We saw a rabbit and a horse.We came back at 5:00 in the afternoon.We were happy .语态不要杂,第一句话改成There were fifteen students in our team.表示过去那个队伍.其他的还好,没有什么错误.
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