改一下英语作文experience is the best teacherIn our lifetime,there are a lot of experiences.They are our best teacher because they can give us various feelings.If I will fail the exam,this experience can make me work harder.During my growth,the

改一下英语作文experience is the best teacherIn our lifetime,there are a lot of experiences.They are our best teacher because they can give us various feelings.If I will fail the exam,this experience can make me work harder.During my growth,the
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experience is the best teacher
In our lifetime,there are a lot of experiences.They are our best teacher because they can give us various feelings.If I will fail the exam,this experience can make me work harder.During my growth,there was a person let me understand what the treasure is.When I was sad,she would comfort me.She stayed with me every day.I have a dependence on her.Unluckily,she has been away from me.I'm too sad to accept the fact that moment.But I understand how to cherish in this experience.Experiences are our best teacher.

改一下英语作文experience is the best teacherIn our lifetime,there are a lot of experiences.They are our best teacher because they can give us various feelings.If I will fail the exam,this experience can make me work harder.During my growth,the
In our lifetime,we may experience a lot,whether setback or success.They are our best teacher through giving us various feelings.
For instance,If I fail in one exam,the experience can boost me to work harder.There're also some experience could play a great role in our daily life.During my growth,there was a person who told me what the treasure is.When I felt sad,she would lead me out of the lost.She stayed with me every day.I was very dependent on him.Unluckily,she has been away from me.I'm too sad to accept the fact that moment.But I understand how to cherish in this experience.
In all,experience is a
hard teacher because she gives the text first,the lesson afterwards.

写的很好，流畅，不过有点夹心英文的味道

In our lifetime，there are a lot of experiences. They are our best teachers because they can give us various feelings. If I failed the exam, this experience will make me work harder.
Growing up, t...

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In our lifetime，there are a lot of experiences. They are our best teachers because they can give us various feelings. If I failed the exam, this experience will make me work harder.
Growing up, there was a person who helped me to understand what the real treasure is. Whenever I was sad, she would comfort me. She stayed with me every day. I depended on her alot. Unluckily, she left me(你想说他离开你了 还是死了？如果死了就是she passed away）. I was too sad to accept the fact that she is gone. However I have learnt how to cherish after this experience. Experiences are our best teachers.
我也不是英文老师，英文也不是最好的~求采纳~

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无法理解文章的思路......下面是随便改改的：
In our lifetime，we will go through many things. And we always get a lot of experiences from them. Those experiences are our best teacher.
They teach us how to do bett...

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无法理解文章的思路......下面是随便改改的：
In our lifetime，we will go through many things. And we always get a lot of experiences from them. Those experiences are our best teacher.
They teach us how to do better next time,and the most important one is that they remind us what we should cherish.
If I fail the exam,for example, I will feel very upset,and I will try to figure out the reason and study harder than ever before.
There was a girl and it is she who let me understand what I should cherish in my life.
Every time I was gloomy, she would comfort me and straighten me out.Whenever it is,
she's always there for me. I was very happy and also depended on her greatly.
Things always change and unfortunately,she left me.
At that moment,I thought I couldn't make it.
But as time pass by,I finally realize that I should step forward.And those days we spent together became the most beautiful memory in my mind.
感觉这两个例子和experience is the best teacher不是特别搭...

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