英语翻译中文：我相信成功并非偶然,只有那些愿意吃苦并有坚定信念的人才会成功.With success never by accident,I believe that only people with determined belief who are willing to work hard will succeed.

英语翻译中文：我相信成功并非偶然,只有那些愿意吃苦并有坚定信念的人才会成功.With success never by accident,I believe that only people with determined belief who are willing to work hard will succeed.
英语翻译
中文：我相信成功并非偶然,只有那些愿意吃苦并有坚定信念的人才会成功.
With success never by accident,I believe that only people with determined belief who are willing to work hard will succeed.

英语翻译中文：我相信成功并非偶然,只有那些愿意吃苦并有坚定信念的人才会成功.With success never by accident,I believe that only people with determined belief who are willing to work hard will succeed.
个人意见：
With success never by accident应调整为：With success never gained by accident,
success是名词,你的翻译给人感觉它与后面的by accident 衔接不上,那就是说,少了表示“获得、得到”之类的非谓语动词部分.

好繁琐，我都懒的改了

I believe that success is not accidental, only those who are willing to endure hardship and with a firm belief will succeed.

With的部分不大通顺，这两个分句之间并不是伴随关系所以用with不大合适，用and把两个分句并列起来吧。“坚定信念”用determined不对，这个形容词以ed结尾一般是形容“人”有决心的，我觉得用tough更合适。另外修饰people的又有定语从句又有with结构虽然没语法错误但感觉有点怪，我觉得并列起来更顺些：only people who are willing to work hard ...

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With的部分不大通顺，这两个分句之间并不是伴随关系所以用with不大合适，用and把两个分句并列起来吧。“坚定信念”用determined不对，这个形容词以ed结尾一般是形容“人”有决心的，我觉得用tough更合适。另外修饰people的又有定语从句又有with结构虽然没语法错误但感觉有点怪，我觉得并列起来更顺些：only people who are willing to work hard and have tough belief will succeed

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嗯，很好哦。就是独立主格结构有点问题。虽然也可以用with+n+介词短语的用法，如：with a book in hand.但是这里success 和by accident 的逻辑关系并不明显，最好加个achieved
而且表with一般表和主语的伴随，特征，表原因的话用as从句好点.
而且，你用了一个介词短语和定语从句同时修饰people，虽然没有语法错误，但是有点别扭哈。最好用...

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嗯，很好哦。就是独立主格结构有点问题。虽然也可以用with+n+介词短语的用法，如：with a book in hand.但是这里success 和by accident 的逻辑关系并不明显，最好加个achieved
而且表with一般表和主语的伴随，特征，表原因的话用as从句好点.
而且，你用了一个介词短语和定语从句同时修饰people，虽然没有语法错误，但是有点别扭哈。最好用相同的结构。把你的稍微改了下：
As success can never be achieved by chance,I believe that only people with strong edurance to hardships and firm determination can enjoy success.

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个人意见：
With success never by accident应调整为：With success never gained by accident，
success是名词，你的翻译给人感觉它与后面的by accident 衔接不上，那就是说，少了表示“获得、得到”之类的非谓语动词部分。