英文作文求检查Myfamily always celebrates on the Spring Festival,because on this day all members of the family will have the time.The celebration was a litter bored,because we have different preferences and age,so it was more difficult to commu

英文作文求检查Myfamily always celebrates on the Spring Festival,because on this day all members of the family will have the time.The celebration was a litter bored,because we have different preferences and age,so it was more difficult to commu
英文作文求检查
Myfamily always celebrates on the Spring Festival,because on this day all members of the family will have the time.
The celebration was a litter bored,because we have different preferences and age,so it was more difficult to communicate with your elder.My grandparents had bought some candy and dried fruits and had put it on the plate before we came.When you arrived,you could watch TV or eating snacks.
At8:00pm,began television program.At this moment,we had been watching TV untilnext day early in the morning.During this time,you couldn’t sleep,this isChina’s tradition.When was twelve o’clock,everyone gave new year’s greetings to his elder.My cousins and I shot off firecrackers afterwards.Then we had been eating dumplings.
有一些连接的词语不知道用的得不得当,还有一些动词的时态什么的,求整体看看怎么样,还有没有可以改善的地方!

英文作文求检查Myfamily always celebrates on the Spring Festival,because on this day all members of the family will have the time.The celebration was a litter bored,because we have different preferences and age,so it was more difficult to commu
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My family always holds celebrations on the Spring Festival, for on this day
all members of the family are free.
However, the celebrations are a litter bored. Since the old and the young
have different preferences, so it is difficult to communicate with one another.
My grandparents usually buy some candies and dried fruits and put them on
the plates before we visit them. When we arrive at their home, we can watch TV
or eat snacks. At 8:00pm, the Spring Festival Gala on the TV begins. Then
we watch the TV program until early next day in the morning. During all
this time, we can’t fall asleep, although we sometimes feel very sleepy. This is
the Chinese tradition. When the clock strikes 12 midnight, everyone should
say New Year’s greetings to the elderly. Afterwards my cousins and I set
off some firecrackers. Then we all eat dumplings.

错误一堆啊，孩纸。所以求助啊!(>﹏<)第一句，celebrates the Spring Festival; would have time.
第二句，usually is a little bit boring. Due to the generation gap, it's difficult to communicate with the seniors. 你丫还真敢说呢……

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错误一堆啊，孩纸。

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My family always celebrates the Spring Festival because on this day all members of the family have time.
The celebration is somtime a litter boring because we have different preferences and age,so...

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My family always celebrates the Spring Festival because on this day all members of the family have time.
The celebration is somtime a litter boring because we have different preferences and age,so it is often difficult for young people to communicate with their seniors. My grandparents usaually prepare some sweets and dried fruits before we come to see them. When we arrive at their home we can watch TV and enjoy some snacks.
In the eve of the Chinese New Year, a special prepared TV program will be broadcasted from 8 pm to the early morning of the next day, we usually watch the TV program the whole night. Many people would stay very late in the newyear' eve as it is believed a good luck according to the Chinese tradition. At mid night everyone would greet each other, especially their parents, grandparents and other senior family members. Meanwhile all different kinds of firework would be set off by children, which is normally done by me and my cousins. Afterwards, we would enjoy the first meal of the new year, which are traditionally dumplings in northern China.

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应该改成这样：
Myfamily always celebrates on the Spring Festival, because on this day all members of the family have the time.
The celebration was a litter bored, because we have different preferenc...

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应该改成这样：
Myfamily always celebrates on the Spring Festival, because on this day all members of the family have the time.
The celebration was a litter bored, because we have different preferences and age,so it was more difficult to communicate with your elder. My grandparents had bought some candy and dried fruits and had put it on the plate before we came. WhenI arrived,I could watch TV or eating snacks.
At8:00pm, began television program. At this moment, we had been watching TV untilnext day early in the morning. During this time,we couldn’t sleep, this isChina’s tradition. When was twelve o’clock, everyone gave new year’s greetings to his elder. My cousins and I shot off firecrackers afterwards. Then we had been eating dumplings

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