英语作文改一下语法错误谢谢,顺便补充一下标题?The most ________ news during the holidayThe most ________ news during the holidaySince the iPad came out,Microsoft hasn’tany movement until it released its first tablet computer last

英语作文改一下语法错误谢谢,顺便补充一下标题?The most ________ news during the holidayThe most ________ news during the holidaySince the iPad came out,Microsoft hasn’tany movement until it released its first tablet computer last
英语作文改一下语法错误谢谢,顺便补充一下标题?The most ________ news during the holiday
The most ________ news during the holiday
Since the iPad came out,Microsoft hasn’tany movement until it released its first tablet computer last week.In my view,Surface can’t be sold well in a short time,and it hasn’t ability to competewith the iPad.Maybe some people like trying something new,but they will giveup the Surface soon because of its experience.
Why I say that?Though the hardware of theSurface is powerful,but the operation system on the Surface Windows had seemednever fit to the tablet devices.However Microsoft barely did it and it’s badfor the Surface.
The same as Ayala thought,I won’t buy aSurface right now and I’m sticking with Apple.

英语作文改一下语法错误谢谢,顺便补充一下标题?The most ________ news during the holidayThe most ________ news during the holidaySince the iPad came out,Microsoft hasn’tany movement until it released its first tablet computer last
Since the iPad came out,Microsoft hasn't had any jiant movement until last week when it released its first tablet Surface.(从句用since,主语一定要用完成时态.）In my view,Surface won't sell well （卖得好与不好,英文习惯上用主动语态）in a short time and it won't be able to compete with the iPad (没有能力或无法,用hasn't ability 是典型中式英文）.Maybe some people would like to try something new,but they will surely give up the Surface soon because of their unfavorable experience.(would like to try 比like trying更能强调动作“去尝试”；谁的体验?自然是那些人的体验.用its experience显然是错误.）
Why should I say that?Though Surface's hardware is powerful,the operating system of Windows does not seem to fit the tablet devices.(用 though就不用but,用but就不能用 though,两者只能择一.）Microsoft barely made its OS work for Windows,however,it is not efficient enough for Surface.
Just as Ayala thought what Surface is,I won't buy a Surface right now.I'll stick with Apple.

The most shocking/suprising/astonishing/impressive/amazing/staggering news during the holiday.
都是'惊奇的令人震惊的印象深刻'的意思的词语