帮我看一下这篇文章的语法对不对My favorite movie is Hannah Montana :The Movie.It is about a girl named Mileywho lives a double life .When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop starnamed Hannah Montana .In order to celebrate her grandma

帮我看一下这篇文章的语法对不对My favorite movie is Hannah Montana :The Movie.It is about a girl named Mileywho lives a double life .When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop starnamed Hannah Montana .In order to celebrate her grandma
帮我看一下这篇文章的语法对不对
My favorite movie is Hannah Montana :The Movie.It is about a girl named Mileywho lives a double life .When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop starnamed Hannah Montana .In order to celebrate her grandma’s birthday ,Mileywent back to her hometown—Tennessee.And shefound out that Hannah Montana brought a lot of trouble for her .But she didn’tgive up and worked out all the problems .I like this movie because it is agreat comedy .And it tells us :Be confidence in yourself .Don’t give up when thingsdon’t turn out the way you planned .The movie gives me a good lesson.

帮我看一下这篇文章的语法对不对My favorite movie is Hannah Montana :The Movie.It is about a girl named Mileywho lives a double life .When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop starnamed Hannah Montana .In order to celebrate her grandma
My favorite movie is Hannah Montana :The M（m）ovie.It (删.与it）is about a girl named Miley who lives a double life .When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop star named Hannah Montana .In order to celebrate her grandma’s birthday ,Miley went back to her hometown—Tennessee.And she found out that Hannah Montana brought a lot of trouble for her .But she didn’t give up and worked out all the problems .I like this movie because it is a great comedy .And it tells us :Be confidence（confident） in yourself .Don’t give up when things don’t turn out the way you planned .The movie gives(gave) me a good lesson.
楼主英语好好哦~如果是演讲稿的话木有问题.书面文章就需要再斟酌一下了,因为有些句子在语法上不成立.
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My favorite movie is Hannah Montana : The Movie.It is about a girl named Miley who lives a double-life . When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop starnamed Hannah Montana . In order to celebrate he...

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My favorite movie is Hannah Montana : The Movie.It is about a girl named Miley who lives a double-life . When she puts her wig on ,she becomes a pop starnamed Hannah Montana . In order to celebrate her grandma’s birthday , Mileywent back to her hometown—Tennessee. And she found out that her popularity as Hannah Montana brought a lot of trouble to her . But she didn’t give up and worked out all the problems . I like this movie because it is a great comedy, and tells us to be confidence in ourselves . Don’t give up when things don’t turn out the way you planned . The movie gives me a good lesson.

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