初二英语作文求批改!看看有没有语法上的错误!I often went to the movie theatre in the past.I used to like to watch movies at the movie theatre,because I thought it's very interesting and it can help me relax.But now I hate watching m

初二英语作文求批改!看看有没有语法上的错误!I often went to the movie theatre in the past.I used to like to watch movies at the movie theatre,because I thought it's very interesting and it can help me relax.But now I hate watching m
初二英语作文求批改!看看有没有语法上的错误!
I often went to the movie theatre in the past.I used to like to watch movies at the movie theatre,because I thought it's very interesting and it can help me relax.But now I hate watching movies at the theatre,because I think it's very boring.Last year,I went to the movie theatre to watch movies with my girlfriend.I spent 300 yuan to watch movies with her.We spent a whole day watching them,but my girlfriend was unhappy.She thought these movies are very boring.I got very sad.After that,I didn't pay any at attention to movies and I didn't went to the movie theatre!
请指出错误与不足之处!谢谢!

初二英语作文求批改!看看有没有语法上的错误!I often went to the movie theatre in the past.I used to like to watch movies at the movie theatre,because I thought it's very interesting and it can help me relax.But now I hate watching m
第一句,用in the past改成at.第二句,at the movie theater 改成 in,第三句it's 用过去式,can用过去时改成could,第六句改成spend...on doing sth,没有spend sometime to do 这种表达,第九句改成过去式,She thought these movies were.,最后一句pay any attention(把at 去掉）还有最有一句时态怎么怪怪的- -改成现在时会好点吧...

语法上：

 I often went to the movie theatre in the past.I used to like watching movies at the movie theatre,because I thought it's very interesting and it could make me relaxed.But now I hate watching movies at the theatre,because I think it was very boring.Last year,I went to the movie theatre to watch movies with my girlfriend.I spent 300 yuan on tickets with her.We spent a whole day watching them,but my girlfriend was unhappy.She thought these movies were very boring.I got very sad.After that,I haven't paid any at attention to movies and gone to the movie theatre!

不足：时态不一致，一些小错误。语句略显啰嗦，词组运用不够。

修改:

 I  went to the movie theatre from time to time in the past.I used to like going to the movies,because I thought it very interesting and it could make me relaxed. However, now I hate it,because it is boring to see a film. Last year,I went to the movie theatre to watch movies with my girlfriend, which cost me 300 yuan.We spent a whole day watching movies,but my girlfriend was unhappy that these movies couldn't draw her interest at all, which made me very sad.Since that,I haven't paid any at attention to movies and gone to the movie theatre!