求英语高手帮我检查下这段简介有没有问题.偶正在写毕业论文,简介非要用英语的,可是偶学日语多年英语已经掉了,写完以后拿不准有没有错,看看标点格式有没有错,或者把不通顺的语句理顺.
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求英语高手帮我检查下这段简介有没有问题.偶正在写毕业论文,简介非要用英语的,可是偶学日语多年英语已经掉了,写完以后拿不准有没有错,看看标点格式有没有错,或者把不通顺的语句理顺.
求英语高手帮我检查下这段简介有没有问题.
偶正在写毕业论文,简介非要用英语的,可是偶学日语多年英语已经掉了,写完以后拿不准有没有错,看看标点格式有没有错,或者把不通顺的语句理顺.
摘 要：网络营销是目前一种重要的营销模式,网络顾客忠诚成为商家竞争所不得不研究的重要因素.本文对网络顾客忠诚的定义和特点进行探讨,确认了网络营销中顾客忠诚的重要性,并认为除了顾客满意等传统因素以外网络技术、利益相关性等因素也对顾客忠诚产生巨大影响,最后以“亚马逊”公司作为案例分析了顾客忠诚的一些重要提升策略.
关键词：网络营销；网络顾客忠诚度；影响因素；提升策略
Abstract:E-marketing cames to be one of the most important mode of marketing,so it’s a must for marketers to study the factors of E-customer loyalty.This article talks about definition,features and the significance of E-customer loyalty; also suggests that E-technology,beneficial Interrelationship and other new factors have major influence on customer loyalty as well as traditional factors such as Customer Satisfaction; yet analyses the advancement strategies of E-customer loyalty by studying the case of ‘Amazon.com’.
Key words:E-marketing；Customer loyalty；Factors；Advancement strategies
求英语高手帮我检查下这段简介有没有问题.偶正在写毕业论文,简介非要用英语的,可是偶学日语多年英语已经掉了,写完以后拿不准有没有错,看看标点格式有没有错,或者把不通顺的语句理顺.
改：
1、E-marketing has became one of the most important modes of marketing, so the loyalism of E-customer is a valuable factor that many marketers have to study in the commercial competition.可以用一个同位语从句表达.
2、talks about 改为 researchs into suggest 改为 fix
3、Finally,it makes use of the case of ‘Amazon.com’ to analyse the advancement strategies of the loyalism of E-customer.加个主语比较好
差不多这样吧