我写了一篇英语作文,希望有人能帮我检查出错误!As time went by,I have spent three monthes in the high school.During that time,I change a lot and learn too much.When I went to the school,everthing appeared new and fresh to me.There a
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我写了一篇英语作文,希望有人能帮我检查出错误!As time went by,I have spent three monthes in the high school.During that time,I change a lot and learn too much.When I went to the school,everthing appeared new and fresh to me.There a
我写了一篇英语作文,希望有人能帮我检查出错误!
As time went by,I have spent three monthes in the high school.During that time,I change a lot and learn too much.When I went to the school,everthing appeared new and fresh to me.There are lots of building and trees.It's very beautiful.I made lots of friengs who are kind and friendly.Everyday,I will fold the bed and wash my clothes.I work hard everyday.I hope I can get good grade.After class,I take part in lots of activities.
我写了一篇英语作文,希望有人能帮我检查出错误!As time went by,I have spent three monthes in the high school.During that time,I change a lot and learn too much.When I went to the school,everthing appeared new and fresh to me.There a
As time went by,I have spent three “months” in the high school.During that time,I "have changed" a lot and "learned much".When I "first came" to the school,everthing "seemed" new and fresh to me.There are lots of building and trees.It's very beautiful.I made lots of friengs who are kind and friendly.Everyday,I "clean" the bed and wash my clothes.I work hard everyday.I hope I can get good grade.After class,I take part in lots of activities.
改的用引号标注了 凑合看吧
too much so much too 有一点贬义
building buildings
朋友写错了
整篇文章改成过去式 会更好