帮我看一下这篇英语文章有没有错误Hello everyone.Which sport do you like best in spring?OK.I think,some people like flying the kite.Spring is a golden time for kite flying.When you see the kites in sky,you will feel the spring is coming

帮我看一下这篇英语文章有没有错误Hello everyone.Which sport do you like best in spring?OK.I think,some people like flying the kite.Spring is a golden time for kite flying.When you see the kites in sky,you will feel the spring is coming
帮我看一下这篇英语文章有没有错误
Hello everyone.Which sport do you like best in spring?
OK.I think,some people like flying the kite.Spring is a golden time for kite flying.When you see the kites in sky,you will feel the spring is coming.
Chinese people invented the kite for wars over 2000 years ago.It is inspired by birds.In the Tang Dynasty,flying kites become a popular game for people.You can see a lot of Tang poetry about kites.14th century,kite flying spread to Europe.And gradually spread all over the world.
Kites have all kinds of shapes,such as flower,bird and fruit.It always means happiness and good luck
Fly the kites in spring is good for your health.And it’s good for your mood,too.So,you’d better fly the kites in spring more the time.

帮我看一下这篇英语文章有没有错误Hello everyone.Which sport do you like best in spring?OK.I think,some people like flying the kite.Spring is a golden time for kite flying.When you see the kites in sky,you will feel the spring is coming
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Hello everyone!
Which sport do you like best in spring?
OK.I think,some people like flying kites.Spring is a golden time for kite- flying.When you see kites in the sky,you will feel that spring is coming.
Chinese people invented the kite for wars over 2000 years ago.It was inspired by birds.In the Tang Dynasty,flying kites became a popular game for people.You can see a lot of Tang poetries about kites.In 14th century,kite -flying began to spread to Europe.And gradually spread all over the world.
Kites have all kinds of shapes,such as flower shape ,bird shape and fruit shape .It always means happiness and good luck.
Flying kites in spring is good for your health.And it’s good for your mood,too.So,you’d better fly the kites in spring as often as possible.

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Hello everyone！
Which sport do you like best in spring?
OK. I think, some people like flying kites. Spring is a golden time for kite- flying. When you see kites in the sky, you will feel ...

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Hello everyone！
Which sport do you like best in spring?
OK. I think, some people like flying kites. Spring is a golden time for kite- flying. When you see kites in the sky, you will feel that spring is coming.
Chinese people invented the kite for wars over 2000 years ago. It was inspired by birds. In the Tang Dynasty, flying kites became a popular game for people. You can see a lot of Tang poetries about kites. In 14th century, kite -flying began to spread to Europe. And gradually spread all over the world.
Kites have all kinds of shapes, such as flower shape , bird shape and fruit shape . It always means happiness and good luck.
Flying kites in spring is good for your health. And it’s good for your mood, too. So, you’d better fly the kites in spring as often as possible.

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