英语改错10处agree that Hong Kong is the attractive place for tourists . I will give reasons why I think it so. First of allHong Kong is a good place for shops and eating. There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants this small city.

英语改错10处agree that Hong Kong is the attractive place for tourists . I will give reasons why I think it so. First of allHong Kong is a good place for shops and eating. There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants this small city.
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agree that Hong Kong is the attractive place for tourists . I will give reasons why I think it so. First of allHong Kong is a good place for shops and eating. There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants this small city. MoreoverHong Kong has a lot of attractions who provide tourists with memorable experience. The two famous theme parksOcean Park or Disneylandattract thousands of tourists from around the world. Hong Kong is an international citybut tourists must also enjoy Chinese tradition culture. In conclusionHong Kong was a very good choice for tourists

英语改错10处agree that Hong Kong is the attractive place for tourists . I will give reasons why I think it so. First of allHong Kong is a good place for shops and eating. There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants this small city.
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　　第一行it去掉
　　第二行shops-->shopping
　　第二行are-->a
　　第三行who--.which/that
　　第四行experience-->experiences
　　第四行or-->and
　　第六行must-->can
　　第六行tradition-->traditional
　　第六行was-->is

agree that Hong Kong is the (an)attractive place for tourists .
I will give reasons why I think it (去掉it)so.
First of all,Hong Kong is a good place for shop(shopping) and eating. There are ...

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agree that Hong Kong is the (an)attractive place for tourists .
I will give reasons why I think it (去掉it)so.
First of all,Hong Kong is a good place for shop(shopping) and eating. There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants(加上in) this small city. Moreover,Hong Kong has a lot of attractions who(which) provide tourists with memorable . The two famous theme parksOcean Park or(and) Disneylandattract thousands of tourists from(all) around the world. Hong Kong is an international citybut(and) tourists must(can) also enjoy Chinese tradition culture. In conclusionHong Kong was(is) a very good choice for tourists

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agree that Hong Kong is the (a)attractive place for tourists . I will give reasons why I think it (把IT 去掉)so. First of allHong Kong is a good place for shops(shopping) and eating. There are a ...

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agree that Hong Kong is the (a)attractive place for tourists . I will give reasons why I think it (把IT 去掉)so. First of allHong Kong is a good place for shops(shopping) and eating. There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants加上一个IN this small city. MoreoverHong Kong has a lot of attractions who(which) provide tourists with memorable experience. The two famous theme parksOcean Park or(and) Disneylandattract thousands of tourists from 加上一个all around the world. Hong Kong is an international citybut(and) tourists must(can) also enjoy Chinese tradition culture. In conclusionHong Kong was (is)a very good choice for tourists

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1、the-an 2、去掉it 3、shops-shopping 4、this 前面加in 5、who-which 6、去掉the
7 、or-and 8、去掉from 9、must-can 10、was-is