英语作文 thesis sentence:beliefs do benefit peopleparagraph 1:beliefs can inspire peopleparagraph 2:beliefs can restrict us to do some illegal and immoral thingsparagraph 3:to make beliefs benefit people,we should choose beliefs which are suitabl
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英语作文 thesis sentence:beliefs do benefit peopleparagraph 1:beliefs can inspire peopleparagraph 2:beliefs can restrict us to do some illegal and immoral thingsparagraph 3:to make beliefs benefit people,we should choose beliefs which are suitabl
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thesis sentence:beliefs do benefit people
paragraph 1:beliefs can inspire people
paragraph 2:beliefs can restrict us to do some illegal and immoral things
paragraph 3:to make beliefs benefit people,we should choose beliefs which are suitable to us
主要就是第三段 算不算跑题
英语作文 thesis sentence:beliefs do benefit peopleparagraph 1:beliefs can inspire peopleparagraph 2:beliefs can restrict us to do some illegal and immoral thingsparagraph 3:to make beliefs benefit people,we should choose beliefs which are suitabl
文章题目是信任对人们有益,一般来说最后一段应该是总结文章上述的观点,而最后一段则是告诉我们怎么选择相互信任,好像不太合适.
偏了。。。还是像前两段一样阐述一下信仰的好处比较好。。。最好能是前两段的升华这不是conclusion段 是三个并列段 所以不用升华== 我想不出其他的好处了 所以这么写。。。 想的是第一第二段是why/how belief benefit people 第三段是what we could do to make it benefit people 算跑是吗==我知道是并列段。。唔。。可能表达的不太...
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偏了。。。还是像前两段一样阐述一下信仰的好处比较好。。。最好能是前两段的升华
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还好吧，不过建议最后一段再写一些信仰带给人的益处，最后劝导人们树立自己的信仰就可以了