英语语法查错72.One expert remarks that a computer with so many tubes as the brain has neurons would require the Empire State Building to contain it.73.Despite this similarity with other creatures,the evolution of humankind differs from other sp

英语语法查错72.One expert remarks that a computer with so many tubes as the brain has neurons would require the Empire State Building to contain it.73.Despite this similarity with other creatures,the evolution of humankind differs from other sp
英语语法查错
72.One expert remarks that a computer with so many tubes as the brain has neurons would require the Empire State Building to contain it.
73.Despite this similarity with other creatures,the evolution of humankind differs from other species in one important and unique way.
78.Suddenly,Gallup’s name was on everyone’s lips; not only he was the prophet of the moment,but it was generally believed that he had founded a new and most important method of prediction.
79.Usually you will be more likely to find insects if you examine finer twigs rather than the coarse parts of trees.
每句有一处错误，查找并改正，请英语好的帮帮忙，
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80.Office revolution not only has changed how work is done but redefined the function of everyone who works in an office.
76.The president devoted his energies to update the curricula,making the education offered at Washington College as meaningful and usual as possible.
第79题：finer无错（more likely，if，rather than，coarse四处中有一个错）

英语语法查错72.One expert remarks that a computer with so many tubes as the brain has neurons would require the Empire State Building to contain it.73.Despite this similarity with other creatures,the evolution of humankind differs from other sp
72.One expert remarks that a computer with so many tubes as the brain has neurons would require the Empire State Building to contain it.
化简：One expert remarks that a computer has neurons.
化简后可知neurons既是has的宾语又是would require的主语,英语中没有类似汉语的兼语,只能够把neurons视作先行词,后面动词的主语要添加指代它的关系代词.
分析：
1.主句：One expert remarks that …
2.宾语从句：A computer with so many tubes as the brain has neurons.
3.定语从句：(which/that) would require the Empire State Building to contain it.
73.Despite this similarity with other creatures,the evolution of humankind differs from other species in one important and unique way.
由于习惯用语in a way(在某种程度上)中间插入了形容词定语,不定冠词a远离名词,结果误用不定限定词one取而代之.
78.Suddenly,Gallup’s name was on everyone’s lips; not only he was the prophet of the moment,but it was generally believed that he had founded a new and most important method of prediction.
Not only置于句首必须用倒装语序,所以要改为not only was he the prophet of the moment
79.Usually you will be more likely to find insects if you examine finer twigs rather than the coarse parts of trees.
尽管rather than也是连词,但已经失去单独的than用于比较级结构的功能,而只是一个相当于but,except表示转折意义的连词,所以前面用比较级finer twig（细嫩枝条）是错误的,应该把finer改为fine
80.Office revolution not only has changed how work
change和work是两个动词,出现两个动词必须考虑连接问题,此处的work是change的宾语,所以要改为不定式how to work.
81.devoted his energies to update the curricula
devote ...to...将...供献于...,这里的to是介词,所以动词update必须改为动名词updating.

72 has前面加which，此句为定语从句。
73 with --改成to ，similar to固定搭配。
78 most前面加the，最高级前面加the。
79 parts---改成part

72.so 改为 as（肯定句用as as）
73.with 改成to
78.he was 改为 was he（部分倒装）
79.finer 改为fine（rather than前后同级）

72 . as 改成 likes
73. one 改成 an
78. 删去it
79. will be 改成 are
我也不是很确定。如果你 有正确答案可不可以告诉我，谢谢嚛..

72 has 前加 which
73 with --to，
78 a--the
79 parts---改成part

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72.One expert remarks that a computer with so many tubes as A brain has neurons would require the Empire State Building to contain it.
73.Despite this similarity with ot...

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72.One expert remarks that a computer with so many tubes as A brain has neurons would require the Empire State Building to contain it.
73.Despite this similarity with other creatures, the evolution of humankind differs from other species in AN important and unique way.
78.Suddenly, Gallup’s name was on everyone’s lips; not only WAS HE (??) the prophet of the moment, but (ALSO??) it was generally believed that he had founded a new and THE most important method of prediction.
79.Usually you will be more likely to find insects if you examine THE finer twigs rather than the coarse parts of trees

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