给我看看这段英语语法有没有错的Music can brings hearing enjoy to people.It in a specific way influence people's feelings.The spirit of the people of the world are given purification and richtake people's spiritual power to get extremely

给我看看这段英语语法有没有错的Music can brings hearing enjoy to people.It in a specific way influence people's feelings.The spirit of the people of the world are given purification and richtake people's spiritual power to get extremely
给我看看这段英语语法有没有错的
Music can brings hearing enjoy to people.It in a specific way influence people's feelings.The spirit of the people of the world are given purification and richtake people's spiritual power to get extremely enhance.My favourite artist is Langlang.He was several American authoritative media called "this era's most genius,the brightest star idols".He is employed in the top of the Berlin philharmonic and he is the five big symphony orchestra of the first Chinese pianist.In a televised concert,I was very lucky to know the famous musician Lang Lang.The reason that I like him because of his music is very dynamic and has fresh life force.His music as abundant emotion,and is suitable for The Times.He said all of the music,all the songs are like a movie.I like this sentence very much.
音乐给人带来听觉上的享受,它以特殊的方式影响着人的思想感情,对人们的精神世界给予净化和丰富,使人们的精神力量得到无比的增强.我最喜欢的艺术家是郎朗,他曾被数家美国权威媒体称作“当今这个时代最天才、最闪亮的偶像明星”,他是受聘于世界顶级的柏林爱乐乐团和美国五大交响乐团的第一位中国钢琴家.我之所以喜欢他是因为他的音乐很有活力,有新鲜的生活力,情感充沛,而且很适合时代性.他曾说过所有的音乐、所有的曲子都像一部电影.我非常喜欢这句话.
这是中文翻译

给我看看这段英语语法有没有错的Music can brings hearing enjoy to people.It in a specific way influence people's feelings.The spirit of the people of the world are given purification and richtake people's spiritual power to get extremely
Music can bring（can后边跟动词原形,所以把brings改为bring） hearing enjoyment （听觉享受的“享受应该是名词”） to people.It influences people's feelingsin a specific way.The spirit of the people of the world are given purification and richtake people's spiritual power to get extremely enhance.My favourite artist is Langlang.He was several American authoritative media called "this era's most genius,the brightest star idols".He is employed in the top of the Berlin philharmonic and he is the five big symphony orchestra of the first Chinese pianist.In a televised concert,I was very lucky to know the famous musician Lang Lang.I like him because his music is very dynamic and has fresh life force.His music as abundant emotion,and is suitable for The Times.He said all of the music,all the songs are like a movie.I like this sentence very much.
感觉你的翻译总是逐字逐句的,有点“中文式英语 ”的感觉.其实你的语法有没有错误我也看不太出来,但就是读着很别扭.
以下是比较标准的翻译（在线翻译上找到）：
Music brings hearing enjoy,it with special way affecting the thoughts and feelings of the people,for the people's mind to give purification and rich,make people's spiritual power to get extremely enhance.My favorite artist is lang lang,he was several American authoritative media called "this era's most genius,the brightest star idols",he is employed in the top of the Berlin philharmonic and the five big symphony orchestra of the first Chinese pianist.The reason that I like him because of his music is very has the vigor,has the fresh life force,abundant emotion,and is suitable for The Times.He said all of the music,all the pieces are like a movie.I like this sentence.

bring去掉s 你这段明显用翻译器翻译的 语句都不通

你写的有很多地方是错的，语法错误太多啦，就不一一纠正了。下面是我根据你的意思译的：
Music can bring enjoyment to people’s sense of hearing. It influences people's feelings in a special way and gives purification and richness to people's s...

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你写的有很多地方是错的，语法错误太多啦，就不一一纠正了。下面是我根据你的意思译的：
Music can bring enjoyment to people’s sense of hearing. It influences people's feelings in a special way and gives purification and richness to people's spiritual world, which largely strengthen people’s spiritual strength. My favourite artist is Langlang. He has ever been regarded as" the most talented and the brightest star idol in this modern era "by several American authoritative media. He is the first person to be employed by the Berlin Philharmonic and the five big symphony orchestras of America as a Chinese pianist. In a televised concert, I was very lucky to know the famous musician, Langlang. The reason why I like him is that his music is very dynamic and it has vivid vitality. Moreover, his music is full of emotion and it is suitable for the contemporary epoch. He ever said all of the music and all the songs were like a movie. I like this sentence very much.

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Music can bring（can后边跟动词原形，所以把brings改为bring） hearing enjoyment （听觉享受的“享受应该是名词”）He was（one of the) several American authoritative media called "this era's most genius, the brightest star idols".