我用英语提问 请你用英文回答 并指出我问题中的语法或句子的错误i was deeply attracted by a girl ,who is a classmite of mine.l like her so much,i want to her to be my girlfriend.but i am a failed student,in grade 4 middle sch

我用英语提问 请你用英文回答 并指出我问题中的语法或句子的错误i was deeply attracted by a girl ,who is a classmite of mine.l like her so much,i want to her to be my girlfriend.but i am a failed student,in grade 4 middle sch
我用英语提问 请你用英文回答 并指出我问题中的语法或句子的错误
i was deeply attracted by a girl ,who is a classmite of mine.l like her so much,i want to her to be my girlfriend.but i am a failed student,in grade 4 middle school.i want tostudy hard but i couldn't stop the missing of her beauty,what shoud i do?i need your help~

我用英语提问 请你用英文回答 并指出我问题中的语法或句子的错误i was deeply attracted by a girl ,who is a classmite of mine.l like her so much,i want to her to be my girlfriend.but i am a failed student,in grade 4 middle sch
I was deeply attracted by a girl ,who is a classmate of mine.l like her so much that I want her to be my girlfriend.But I am a failed student in grade 4 middle school.I decided to study hard but I couldn't stop missing her beauty,what should I do?I need your help~!
ANSWER:
I think that if you really like the girl you should find a chance to tell her .Judging from your description to the girl ,I can imagine that girl must be very beautiful.In my opinion there must be many boys like you admire her.Maybe the girl doesn't have boy friend now but that doesn't mean that she will have enough time to wait for yo to improve your study and then express your adore to her.Now,I give you some advice
1、 the first thing you must do is to tell her that you love and at the same time you should make a promise that you will study hard in future
2、the second thing is that you should try your best to study hard wo improve your marks
3、let her konw that you love her by no means only beacause of her beautiful.you should treasure her after you make friend
with her
Now,don't wait any more.have a try

It seems that your English writing is not bad.You must be a junior student,are't you?
In your sentences,spell a word wronly."classmate"but not"classmite"
Besides,the sentences are quite good.I...

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It seems that your English writing is not bad.You must be a junior student,are't you?
In your sentences,spell a word wronly."classmate"but not"classmite"
Besides,the sentences are quite good.I am proud of you.Come on.You said that you like that girl,I think that you should try you best to impove your study in order to let her find that you are a good boy for her.you should be brave to talk more with her .When you are having class,pay attentiong to the teacher and not miss her but after class,you can miss her whenever you like .I think that you are a clever boy and I know that you has known how to do .
wish you every success.!Add oil

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“classmite”i think you just tpye it wrong,it should be"classmate"
"i want to her to be my girlfriend."you should use "i want her to be my girlfriend"
"i couldn't stop the missing of her beauty...

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“classmite”i think you just tpye it wrong,it should be"classmate"
"i want to her to be my girlfriend."you should use "i want her to be my girlfriend"
"i couldn't stop the missing of her beauty"it should be"i couldn't stop missing of her"
so,now here we go,i will answer your question.First of all,i don't think studying is everything,so if you loke her,just go to her and tell her what you think.secondly,you should be confident,believe in yourself!maybe you also appeal to her,so...lastly,i think the most important thing of love is the emotion you have,not other things,so just show your love to that girl,you should let her know what's your feeling.
so,just keep doing,fighting!Believe in yourself!

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你第一行第十一个单词拼错，应该是“classmate”。第一行最后应该是“I want her to be my girl friend”。后面是那句可以改成“But I am a poor middle school student in grade 4”。第三行刚开头应该改成“couldn’t stop missing her beauty”。
回答：I think you shoul...

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你第一行第十一个单词拼错，应该是“classmate”。第一行最后应该是“I want her to be my girl friend”。后面是那句可以改成“But I am a poor middle school student in grade 4”。第三行刚开头应该改成“couldn’t stop missing her beauty”。
回答：I think you should study hard at school now.You know you are a junior four student,you will soon have an important exam.If you get good marks in the exam,you can go to a good senior high school.If you don't study hard now,you mustn't get good marks,then your life will be greatly changed.Since you are not goood at study,you should study harder than ever before.I'm sure you will soon get out of this problem.

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I've modified your passage and mark changes with "[]".
[I'm] deeply attracted by [a girl who] is [my classmate]. I love her so much and [want her to] be my girlfriend. I'm not a very [good at stu...

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I've modified your passage and mark changes with "[]".
[I'm] deeply attracted by [a girl who] is [my classmate]. I love her so much and [want her to] be my girlfriend. I'm not a very [good at study] (in grade 4 middle school(what's this?)) I want to study hard but can't [stop missing her]. What should I do? I need your help~!
I only want to check your words but talk about your question. I don't well understand the philosophy of the 90' generation, so forgive me.

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i was deeply attracted 'by' a girl---to
classmite---classmate
'want to' her to be my girlfriend---want
i couldn't stop 'the missing of 'her beauty---thinking of
i want 'tostudy '----to...

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i was deeply attracted 'by' a girl---to
classmite---classmate
'want to' her to be my girlfriend---want
i couldn't stop 'the missing of 'her beauty---thinking of
i want 'tostudy '----to study
Just be yourself and make a plan:
First:Spend 1~2 hours thinking of waht you had learnt today and write down your questions and ask others tomorrow.Don't be too tired,make sure of enough sleep.
ATTENTION:You must keep on doing this.
Second:
Find out if you really like her,or you are just attracted to her beauty.You are around 17,so you will be courise about females,it's not bad.But if she become your girlfriend soon,how to keep your relationship after you two graduating?Think carefully,maybe you can just be good friends.Find a hobby.It does help if you can't stop thinking of her.
If you say"i know i really love her",OK.Ask her if she likes you and respect her idea.Don't miss your subject or affect your study.you know you are not very good,Yes?

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I was deeply attracted by a girl who is a classmate of mine.I like her so much,I want her to be my girlfriend but I am a failed student in grade 4 middle school.I want to study hard but I couldn't sto...

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I was deeply attracted by a girl who is a classmate of mine.I like her so much,I want her to be my girlfriend but I am a failed student in grade 4 middle school.I want to study hard but I couldn't stop missing her beauty,what shoud I do?I need your help~!
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If you really love the girl you should attracte her first.So you should work hard to get good grades so that she will think you are not bad.Secondly you can ask her question.By this way you could also get on well with her.Then she will know you better.
At last,remember never be lazy or she will hate you.
That's all for my opinion.
Good luck.

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