求英语帝看看这篇介绍有没有什么语法啊用词的错误.We trace the evolution of an eleven-year-old boy in the Midwest,Jack,one of three brothers.At first all seems marvelous to the child.He sees as his mother does with the eyes of his

求英语帝看看这篇介绍有没有什么语法啊用词的错误.We trace the evolution of an eleven-year-old boy in the Midwest,Jack,one of three brothers.At first all seems marvelous to the child.He sees as his mother does with the eyes of his
求英语帝看看这篇介绍有没有什么语法啊用词的错误.
We trace the evolution of an eleven-year-old boy in the Midwest,Jack,one of three brothers.At first all seems marvelous to the child.He sees as his mother does with the eyes of his soul.She represents the way of love and mercy,where the father tries to teach his son the world’s way of putting oneself first.Each parent contends for his allegiance,and Jack must reconcile their claims.The picture darkens as he has his first glimpses of sickness,suffering and death.The world,once a thing of glory,becomes a labyrinth.
From this story is that of adult Jack,a lost soul in a modern world,seeking to discover amid the changing scenes of time that which does not change:the eternal scheme of which we are a part.When he sees all that has gone into our world’s preparation,each thing appears a miracle—precious,incomparable.Jack,with his new understanding,is able to forgive his father and take his first steps on the path of life.
The story ends in hope,acknowledging the beauty and joy in all things,in the everyday and above all in the family—our first school—the only place that most of us learn the truth about the world and ourselves,or discover life’s single most important lesson,of unselfish love.
是生命之树的简介。我是从一个网站上找的。想知道是不是翻译软件翻的。

求英语帝看看这篇介绍有没有什么语法啊用词的错误.We trace the evolution of an eleven-year-old boy in the Midwest,Jack,one of three brothers.At first all seems marvelous to the child.He sees as his mother does with the eyes of his
有点像工具翻译的,无从下手啊

where the father tries to teach his son the world’s way of putting oneself first.
while表示对比，前面讲了他妈妈对他的教育方式，而后面则讲他爸爸对他的教育方式。
From this story is that of adult Jack, a lost soul in a mode...

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where the father tries to teach his son the world’s way of putting oneself first.
while表示对比，前面讲了他妈妈对他的教育方式，而后面则讲他爸爸对他的教育方式。
From this story is that of adult Jack, a lost soul in a modern world, seeking to discover amid the changing scenes of time that which does not change。
that which does not change，应该把that或 which去掉。that或 which在定语从句中作主语，用一个就够了。

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你是不是用翻译工具翻译的呢？好像是用工具翻译的