【英语】请高手看下我这句话有没有语法错误~谢谢!Another effect the car has greater than the plane, as far as i am concerned, is that on our environment.语法上是否有错?总觉得怪怪的~~1.the car has greater than the plane

【英语】请高手看下我这句话有没有语法错误~谢谢!Another effect the car has greater than the plane, as far as i am concerned, is that on our environment.语法上是否有错?总觉得怪怪的~~1.the car has greater than the plane
【英语】请高手看下我这句话有没有语法错误~谢谢!
Another effect the car has greater than the plane, as far as i am concerned, is that on our environment.
语法上是否有错?总觉得怪怪的~~
1.the car has greater than the plane有错吗？
要是写成the car has肯定没问题，但是加了 greater than the plane还对吗，总觉得缺东西。。

2.is that on our environment里的that是不是可以不要，我这个that是想替代effect的，不是连词。。
是不是总到句子成分就相当于 another effect,....,is on our environment？？

【英语】请高手看下我这句话有没有语法错误~谢谢!Another effect the car has greater than the plane, as far as i am concerned, is that on our environment.语法上是否有错?总觉得怪怪的~~1.the car has greater than the plane
有错误……首先,Another effect the car has greater than the plane,你是将effect作为主语,这样the car只能是定语从句中的主语,Another effect (that) the car has中the car 是主语,effect是作为has的宾语,但是后面又有greater than the planes,对应的主语应该要是effect的,但是从刚才的分析可以知道从句的主语是the car,所以就不正确了.这是在一句中表达了两个意思,即：Another effect that the car has,which is greater than the planes.这种写法可以看出两个从句的主语都是effect,就正确了.但是这样表述很累赘,要换种表示方法.后面那句的that是拿来干什么的……这样能看出来是要这样写的：effect is on environment.

有两点错误：1、主语这一堆非常乱，改成Another greater effect the car has compared with plane,会好一些。这个比较词than这样用起来很别扭，形容词greater应该是修饰名词的。2：谓语和宾语有问题，去掉that语法上才是正确的。把这个句子的主干（即主谓宾）拿出来，应该是：Another effect is on our environment...

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有两点错误：1、主语这一堆非常乱，改成Another greater effect the car has compared with plane,会好一些。这个比较词than这样用起来很别扭，形容词greater应该是修饰名词的。2：谓语和宾语有问题，去掉that语法上才是正确的。把这个句子的主干（即主谓宾）拿出来，应该是：Another effect is on our environment.这样才是正确的。对于这种比较长的句子，一定要分析好句子的成分，认清主干，尤其注意不能有两个谓语。（个人的一点小经验，毕竟我曾经也是吃过亏的啊）

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1、the car is greater than the plane
2、that is on our environment

Another effect (that) the car has greater than the plane, as far as i am concerned, is that on our environment.
effect需要一个that引导后面的从句。

句子基本正确 在 has 后面加上 which is 就可以了
Another effect 是主语
the car has 是定语从句 which is greater than the plane也是定语从句,
as far as i am concerned是插入语,
is是系动词 that是指示代词= the effect是表语
on our ...

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句子基本正确 在 has 后面加上 which is 就可以了
Another effect 是主语
the car has 是定语从句 which is greater than the plane也是定语从句,
as far as i am concerned是插入语,
is是系动词 that是指示代词= the effect是表语
on our environment是定语.

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