改错1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 　　2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.　　I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I des

改错1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 　　2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.　　I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I des
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1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
　　2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
　　I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I destroyed each of my toy.I was happy when the toys worked,but when things did wrong,I got angry and broke it.For a while parents bought me new toys.But before long they began to see which was happening.When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train,my father said,"That's it.No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year.Meanwhile,I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last My attitude changed from then on

改错1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 　　2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.　　I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive.From the time I was about four until I was about six,I des
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little（LESS） aggressive. From the time I was about four until(TO) I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy(TOYS). I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did(WENT) wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which(WHAT) was happening. When I tear(TORE) apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to(FOR) you." My punishment lasted (FOR)a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must (COULD)make my toys to(去掉to) last My attitude changed from then on
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I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. little改为less.因为前面有more patient更加耐心，故后面也要有比较级，less agressive, 少一点急躁。
From the time I was about four until I was about si...

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I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. little改为less.因为前面有more patient更加耐心，故后面也要有比较级，less agressive, 少一点急躁。
From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. toy要改为复数，toys.既然是玩具当中的每一个，当然是有很多玩具啦。
I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. did要改为went。go wrong是固定词组,表示出毛病。
But before long they began to see which was happening. which改为what,理解为他们看出来发生了什么事情。
When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, tear改为tore, 整个故事都发生在过去，要用过去式。tear的意思是扯，过去式为tore.
That's it. No more toys to you." to you改为for you,意思是给你。
Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last。 to last前面的to删除，因为make sth 动词原形，是固定搭配，意思为“使得玩具可以持续（使用）。
My attitude changed from then on。 changed改为has changed， from then on的意思是从那时起，一般搭配现在完成时，have/has +过去分词。

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