改错原文自己对着改Li Han is a good friend of mine.He made a deep impression on me the first time we met,and we became good friends.He is tall and thin.When I first met him,it was rainy and cold.He wore a white T-shirt and blue jeans,with a b

改错原文自己对着改Li Han is a good friend of mine.He made a deep impression on me the first time we met,and we became good friends.He is tall and thin.When I first met him,it was rainy and cold.He wore a white T-shirt and blue jeans,with a b
改错原文自己对着改Li Han is a good friend of mine.He made a deep impression on me the first time we met,and we became good friends.
He is tall and thin.When I first met him,it was rainy and cold.He wore a white T-shirt and blue jeans,with a big smile on his face,which made him look sunny.He doesn’t look very handsome,but bright.The glasses on his nose made him look bookish.Whenwe talked I discovered that he was full of humor.Seeing that I hadn’t brought an umbrella,he shared his,which made me feel warm.He seemed excellent and kind,and I was determined to learn from him

改错原文自己对着改Li Han is a good friend of mine.He made a deep impression on me the first time we met,and we became good friends.He is tall and thin.When I first met him,it was rainy and cold.He wore a white T-shirt and blue jeans,with a b
Li Han is a good friend of mine.He made a deep impression on me the first time we met,and we have became good friend.
He is tall and thin.When I met him first,it was rainy and cold.He wrote a white T-shirt and blue jeans with a big smile on his face,which made him look sunny.He doesn‘t look very handsome but bright.The glasses on his nose made him look bookish.I discovered he was full of humor .When we talked.Seeing that I hadn’t brought an umbrella,he shared his umbrella with we,which made me to feel warm.He seemed excellent and kind,and I was determined to learn from him.

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Li Han is a good friend of mine. He made a deep impression on me the first time we met, and we became good friends.
He is tall and thin. When I first met him, it was rainy and cold. He wore a ...

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Li Han is a good friend of mine. He made a deep impression on me the first time we met, and we became good friends.
He is tall and thin. When I first met him, it was rainy and cold. He wore a white T-shirt and blue jeans, with a big smile on his face, which made him look sunny. He doesn’t look very handsome, but bright. The glasses on his nose made him look bookish. When we talk I discovered that he is full of humor. He will share his umbrella with me seeing that I haven’t brought one , which makes me feel warm. He is indeed excellent and kind, and I am determined to learn from him.原文写的很不错，只是后半部分时态不妥当。

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