英语作文 怎么样 给点切实意见On College LifeWith my fantastic desire for college life I step on my journey to pursue my dream in Whu a year ago.While,different from my imagination full of ideal and stupid ideas,serious competition exists

英语作文 怎么样 给点切实意见On College LifeWith my fantastic desire for college life I step on my journey to pursue my dream in Whu a year ago.While,different from my imagination full of ideal and stupid ideas,serious competition exists
英语作文 怎么样 给点切实意见
On College Life
With my fantastic desire for college life I step on my journey to pursue my dream in Whu a year ago.While,different from my imagination full of ideal and stupid ideas,serious competition exists beyond the casual campus life.Some day the moment I came out of my sweet dream,deep in the hills was reading loudly spreading into my ears.Maybe it’s just a melody,or a clock on me.In a word,it’s time to wake up early of my dream to go forward.
One year’s experiencing tells me study in university is to attain what you are really interested in and keep on that.Having left caring parents and kind teachers in senior high,we seem lost in large and free uni where we had dreamed.I wonder how,I wonder why,I wonder where we are,the days we spent,and the roads we covered.Before uni we were forced to do in school.Now What I want to be and I want to do guide us in uncertainty.On the other hand,temptations often breaks into me,how should I handle those appeals,confronting the colorful campus life,whether to take and whether to lose test my determination.Latest movie or homework,skip class or having class such easy problems are sometimes hard selections.
We each one have a college life,all won’t have a wonderful one,get busy living or get busy dying!

英语作文 怎么样 给点切实意见On College LifeWith my fantastic desire for college life I step on my journey to pursue my dream in Whu a year ago.While,different from my imagination full of ideal and stupid ideas,serious competition exists
嗯 ,再多学点,多记一记,相信你,一定能行的.虽然这个不太成功～但是你要继续努力噢!相信自己

说实在的,你这篇作为文法错误挺多的,而且用词也不够地道.合起来意义混乱不堪.

你的字好像没有难的噻，senior high？？？呵呵 不过还想 拿高分没啥问题

在学院生活上
在我的旅程上具有我的对学院生活的奇妙渴求我行走在年以前追求 Whu 的我梦。 当,的时候不同的我充满理想的想像和愚蠢的主意，严重的竞争存在超过偶然的校园生活。来日我从我的甜梦出来的片刻,深入地在小山中正在读大声地进入我的耳朵之内传布。 也许它只是一首曲子 , 或在我上的一个时钟。 总而言之，现在是该醒来的时候早的我梦向前地去。
年经历告诉我读大学要达到你真的感兴趣的...

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在学院生活上
在我的旅程上具有我的对学院生活的奇妙渴求我行走在年以前追求 Whu 的我梦。 当,的时候不同的我充满理想的想像和愚蠢的主意，严重的竞争存在超过偶然的校园生活。来日我从我的甜梦出来的片刻,深入地在小山中正在读大声地进入我的耳朵之内传布。 也许它只是一首曲子 , 或在我上的一个时钟。 总而言之，现在是该醒来的时候早的我梦向前地去。
年经历告诉我读大学要达到你真的感兴趣的和在那上的生计。有左边关心父母和类型资深的高度老师, 我们大致上遗失和我们已经做梦的自由 uni。 我奇迹如何, 我奇迹为什么, 我奇迹我们在哪里, 我们花费的数天 , 和道路我们隐蔽着的。 在我们不得不在学校中做的 uni之前。 现在我所当的而且我在不确定中做引导者我们。 另一方面，诱惑时常闯入我,我如何应该处理那些诉愿,面对五彩缤纷的校园生活, 是否拿而且是否失去测试我的决心。 最近的电影或家庭操作, 跳跃课或有课如此容易的问题有时是难的选择。
我们每一个有学院生活,全部将会没有一个令人惊奇的,拿忙碌的生活或很忙碌垂死!

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